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Young Doctor Comes to Town Causing a Disturbance (1/2)

Mar 05, 2012 02:31

Title: Young Doctor Comes to Town Causing a Disturbance (1/2)
Author: rockerblonde
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 7,100
Beta: valenti1965
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are the property of Telenext.
Summary: A young doctor finds love, but it has consequences for several people...

( If you would have told Noah two years ago that he would be in a relationship with a doctor, he would've said you were mad. )

Comments 15

sarahsezlove March 6 2012, 22:31:47 UTC

Well, good grief!!!
I don't know where to start - so many fabulous things.
Poor Noah - to find out that Reid was married only after he's well and truly in love with him.
Reid - well...he's not exactly blameless, but you can't fault him for his taste.
Jerry - least said, soonest forgotten.
Mandy - what a darlin'

I'm just hoping that Noah's new job, along with the honesty they're now sharing, brings them closer.

And I almost forgot....DAMN HOT!!!!

rockerblonde March 7 2012, 08:00:20 UTC

lol glad you enjoyed it

neddiheht March 8 2012, 23:19:19 UTC

Poor Noah, to be put in that position... falling in love with a married man and not knowing it. On the other hand, at least the feelings from Reid seem genuine. The sex is hot, and I love the idea of Noah bottoming.

I adore the pet name "precious" -- and pet names in general. But precious is the last pet name I would expect applied to Noah and here it totally works, I think because it comes from Reid. I have to think I wouldn't buy it as a pet name from Luke, though I struggle to articulate exactly why.

I struggle a little that Noah would allow the affair to continue, and then I think about what it's like to be in love and I think I'm forced to concede that I'm not as moral as I'd like to think... if I was in love I can't be sure that such a thing would stop me, even if I'd like to think it would. I wish we could see more of Noah's internal struggle with that, and yet the simple way you show us Reid begging forgiveness and pleading that he loves Noah is so revealing.

rockerblonde March 9 2012, 18:59:35 UTC

thanks glad you enjoyed it i was trying to keep have Noah a little different than the tv Noah with him being a shrinks lol (Cant spell the propere name lol) but at the same time i wanted to try and show a softer side to Reid.

glad you liked the pet name i am with you it would be Luke being given a name like that and Noah getting a more butcher pet name lol

appassionata1 March 15 2012, 04:21:21 UTC

Saying those two boys are hot for each other is an understatement, lol. Noah must have a deep connectiion to Reid for staying with him after he found out about Jerry. I think Noah needs to kick Jerry's a** after he came to his office and attacked him! I think Reid is kinda shady here. I'll have to read Chapter 2 to find out :-)

rockerblonde March 15 2012, 18:28:18 UTC

well he was not meant to come across like that lol