Ok so tomorrow I have my first assignment due. Wow a report on me, can you all read it and tell me what you think?? Please I need help here. Anyway I am excited and scared and all that other stuff. Wish me luck
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anonymous
February 19 2004, 07:15:22 UTC
Hey, it looks pretty good to me, but I also think maybe you could go into more detail! And yeah what exactly is the assignment?? Also, in the sentence, "unfortunately the industry isn’t working well for them." I am just confused as to who "them" is? Do you mean that the industry itself isn't going well right now? Or that the industry didn't work out well for you? Anyways, other than that it is good! ;P
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