My sad excuse for a sonnet

[rocknlife]

My dad too soon will need a pallbearer

Comments

[maybesomday]

its good
its raw its real
and love always hopes
and always trusts(God)
just thought i'd throw that out there
love yah

[rayefrenzy]

use fucking. i has more emotion in this context.

more christians need a foul mouth like me.

good luck.