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[rockonwood]

leaving me with the blame
life flows from my veins
raining my pain
over words left restrained
and the silent remains
of feelings left maim!

i guess its all the same
just a part of your game?
your exciting the lame
by dropping my name
and while killing my flame
you live out your fame!

...and i call you my best friend?

Comments

whoa whoa

[artist4god]

awesome! all that rhyming practice paid off... lol
nice entry...well written.
You're awesome!
(:

red light parade

[rockonwood]

well thank you!
i dont like how much it rhymes but sometimes you gotta do stuff different!?
and by the way you are way more awesome than i could ever try to be!

[rockonwood]

your way too goofy!
but i luv ya.
and i need to talk to you so please give me a call if you can... i am pretty sure you have my number but if not i~m later and i will give it to you cause i dont want to post it on here!
K?

[marycontrary90]

leaving me with the blame
life flows from my veins

i like that. its very vivid and creates an image in my mind. the rhyme scheme is pretty intense, lol!

your very talented, and its good to see someone with such talent take it and channel it into something beautiful, ya know?

[rockonwood]

hey thanx bud.... yeah the rhyme is really well,? rhyming! :) but it was fun to write.
and thanx for thinking my stuff is beautiful it makes me feel all happy and fuzzy inside!!!

alligators and homeless people

[anonymous]

Hello. It's me. Just wanted to let you know I read your stuff. You're going to be famous, I'm sure of it. Good night friend.

Re: alligators and homeless people

[rockonwood]

HEYYYYYYY...
i had so much fun the other night! and famous? i mean come on?

[plasticrice]

ouch.

[rockonwood]

it's not to you....(: i love you more than ever!
it to my best guy friend! goof ball!