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The Give and Take-Out, Sam and Dean, PG

Jul 25, 2006 16:53

Title: The Give and Take-Out
Author: kimonkey7
Pairing/Characters: Sam and Dean gen.
POV: both
Word Count: 1031
Rating: PG for a little language
Spoilers: none
Summary: Sacrifice and cuisine.

“What’s ‘foy grass’?”

“What?”

“’Foy grass.’ It says the burger has ‘foy grass’ on it.”

Sam scanned the menu, a little smile growing on his lips. “’Fwah gwah ( Read more... )

rating:pg, user:kimonkey7, title:the give and take out, challenge:1high society, type:fic

Comments 20

fresleyforever July 26 2006, 22:33:51 UTC

Oh this was lovely and funny and sweet.

It made me giggle quite a bit!

Thanks!

kimonkey7 July 26 2006, 22:37:14 UTC

Yay! Giggling! I love giggling. I love making giggles happen. Also, peegling. That's when you giggle so hard you end up..you know...PEEgling. Yay!

*wonders if others will think she is too weird*

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

gdsptdgfan August 3 2006, 03:12:18 UTC

Man, i'll tell you, i've been writting a fic for this challenge, and i'm almost done with it (i decided to write since they extended the deadline and all) but i wasn't sure mine was good enough, or ever really fit the critera . . . i'm still not sure mine is "high life" enough . . . but so i decided to come and read what some other people have done to see if mine is kinda fitting to the category at least . . .

Well, now i'm pretty damn sure i don't wanna submitt it because it's no where even CLOSE to being as good as yours.

I'm might still submit mine to get concrit since i'm new to this fandom . . . hell, i'm new to fanfic writting in general. But yeah, maybe i'll submit mine for concrit since i can tell it doesn't belong in a category with stuff as good as yours.

kimonkey7 August 3 2006, 04:11:59 UTC

omgoodness.

Please, PLEASE never hold back submitting something based on my writing, or anyone else's, for that matter. That's...that's just CRAZY.

I'm touched you'd think to hold my piece up as any kind of example, but...omg, PLEASE DON'T. We are, ALL of us, playing in this field. In the few months since I got turned on to fanfic, I've not heard of anyone who is a "prefessional fanfic writer". Just isn't a job, much to my dismay. Everybody is spreading their wings and trying things out and you should be no exception.

Hell, if I didn't post because there was stuff better than mine, you would never have read this story. We are all at different levels. If you can take the concrit, go for it. Grow and learn. That's what I do.

So, post. Please. I look forward to reading it. :D