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rocky_fan

No shot-no death (chapter 9/12)

Aug 05, 2009 16:52

So next chapter is finished, please leave a comment!

Chapter 9

Silvia’s POV:

As I wake up, I’m the only one in the bed, sleepy I hear laughter.

“Mhh…morning!”, I mumble, when I come out of the bedroom “what are you both doing, here?”

“Ähm, nothing”, that doesn’t sound really convincing.

And than I see it: “You don’t show her, how to ( Read more... )

pepa, fanfiction, los hombres de paco, silvia

Comments 8

sia_9 August 4 2009, 19:55:29 UTC

That was really good I love the ideas you have. Maite is like a little silvia. Great work rocky

rocky_fan August 4 2009, 20:45:33 UTC

Thanks, sia, next chapter is on the way ;-)

selinakris August 4 2009, 21:25:40 UTC

awww, they are so cute together.

rocky_fan August 4 2009, 21:54:28 UTC

That's great, if you find them cute ;-)

raven_bard August 5 2009, 08:11:18 UTC

They're acting like a lil family already. Sweet! Maite is like the blend between Pepa and Silvia..it's so fun to read!

rocky_fan August 15 2009, 21:02:31 UTC

And it's so fun to write ;-)

kiarcheo August 14 2009, 20:48:41 UTC

“Normally no one is so stupid to put me alone with kids” it surprised me that Silvia didn't react at being called stupid XD
I love this story!

rocky_fan August 15 2009, 21:02:10 UTC

Good pointm actualy ;-)