Kapoor's Weekend of Fail

[rodant_kapoor]

Kapoor's weekend got off to a bad start as he rolled up his sleeves and got to work on Gone to Earth chapter 27. Usually, when Kapoor turns a rough draft into a first draft, he'll read it aloud to make certain everything sounds right, and also check the text for sufficient conflict & motivation. In the case of chapter 27, it neither sounded right

Comments

[pyat]

and ended up with a miniskirt for a fat man.

I'm sure you could eBay it!

[rudebehavior]

Kapoor's not some vixen who looks hawt in a red dress.

Maybe not, but you look pretty good in a black one!