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[rodentwrangler]

I'm losing the flow a little bit on this second copy, but I feel that the imagery and plot was a little whimsical on the first draft. I don't know, I still feel good about it, but it's something that I think I could make better.

Lian Han

3rd draft time.

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[aloverseyes]

hi friend.

[rodentwrangler]

hey i forgot about that. Hi frieeeennnndssss