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Those Rough Men Chapter 5
Aug 09, 2008 10:48
Subject chapter may be found
here
.
Previously
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
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chuckles48
August 9 2008, 19:45:28 UTC
You really jump temporal perspective around on this, y'know. The chapter breaks you're using are good places for that, but it's a bit jarring.
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