The Tenacious Treecko

Mar 29, 2005 16:27

Episode 3

The Tenacious Treecko
It is mid-morning and once again Beaver finds himself wondering aimlessly through another wooded area. Suddenly he comes walking out of the overgrowth and right out onto a road. He looks up and down the road and to his right he sees a sign that reads, “Route 2: To Ciencia Village.” Just as Beaver let out a sigh of ( Read more... )

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Hiya! anonymous April 18 2005, 08:30:22 UTC
wow! another great like entry to the story...cant wait to like read more and stuff..keep doing wat your doing cuz man its awesome!
-MaryLou"T"

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ariyanaforever June 28 2005, 00:30:27 UTC
Hey, fictionhaven Mod here. Reading through this first episode I would say my biggest recommendation here is to go all prose with this. The script parts disrupt the flow of the writing. I know you are trying to make episodes here but honestly going with a straight prose format will only help the story. That's just my two cents here. Good luck with your story.

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