Battle of Britain--Chapter 21

May 18, 2012 20:54

Rating: R (language and sexual situations)

Author: morgan72uk and Rogoblue

Summary: Plans and preparations are being made and adoption agencies are proving to be challenging.

Chapter 21 )

dollhouse, rating: r, fic, chara: adelle dewitt, chara: laurence dominic

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yazizzle33 May 19 2012, 04:58:28 UTC
Oh man, I worry how Kate and Adelle will get along. :/ It just seems to rushed to me but I know you guys will do it justice. :) I have faith in you both!

Oh and I love Juliet! She's fabulous! I love all of Adelle's family actually. They're all so unique and supporting. <3

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rogoblue May 19 2012, 17:01:03 UTC
It is rushed, but I think Adelle needed a push to actually allow herself to agree to marry him. So ... we shall see how the relationship develops!

Juliet is a maternal figure that Adelle is finally permitting herself to avail herself of. Wow--that was really poor sentence structure, but I hope you get my meaning. Even the snooty members of Adelle's family came off ok, I think. It might be natural for them to imagine that Laurence is after Adelle's money.

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yazizzle33 May 19 2012, 18:59:36 UTC
Oh no, I agree she needed a big push. It just makes me nervous how she'll get along with the little girl since it's Dominic who has the touch with her.

Haha, I got what you meant. And yes, even the snooty members came off well. All of their reactions were perfect.

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darling_ashes May 19 2012, 21:36:45 UTC
Awww, Kate loves her teddy bear Gustav (after Adelle's). SO CUTE! I hope everything works out for the three of them. They are too precious.

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rogoblue May 19 2012, 22:45:31 UTC
Powerwalking in a BAMF way through a toy store was brilliant. My contribution to that bit was that the bear had to be BIG!

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