Comments | rogoblue: Out of Excuses--Franklin & Bash fic

rogoblue

Out of Excuses--Franklin & Bash fic

Aug 08, 2013 21:51

Inspired by last night's episode, this damn thing wouldn't let go of me. It's all about the kiss and you folks who disapproved, please read.

Rating: R
Summary: A bit of good news arrives for Damien.
Spoilers: Season 3 and the end of Season 1.
Disclaimers: The toys are not mine but the idea is.

( Do you have a minute? )

fic, character: damien karp, character: rachel king, franklin and bash, r

Comments 2

vic_amy_z August 9 2013, 07:34:17 UTC

I hope that when Damien gets appointed to the bench, that this is exactly what happens!

I actually liked the kiss in the episode, and impulsive!Damien too. They make a pretty perfect couple in this fic, and Rachel would absolutely take him out somewhere discreet and classy, only to have the party crashed by the rest of the team!

rogoblue August 9 2013, 15:20:54 UTC

I tried to make Rachel vulnerable but not weak. Damien too for that matter. I can actually see many interesting ways they could go/things they could do, if they make these two a couple.

Yes, Rachel would take over the celebration to set up her observation about him finding another excuse. She strikes me as liking to take on challenges on her turf and I think this classy restaurant served that purpose. I'm not sure I'd want to be Damien to face Stanton over not being told first, though. I'm trying not to think about that.

It was interesting, in the week before this latest episode aired, I'd asked myself if Damien had even looked at a woman twice the entire season. And I'd wondered why there wasn't a scene between him and Colleen Bash. Then he kissed Rachel which left me wondering if this had been in the works all along in the let's make it clear that both of these people are verrrryyyy single.

As always, thanks for taking the time to read and comment!:)