Overboard (remix) 3/6

[rogueangel1998]

Title:  Overboard (remix) 3/6

Author:  rogueangel1998

Rating:  PG-13

Characters/pairings:  Jim/Bones, with appearances of Spock, Gary Mitchell, Scotty, Sulu, Chekov and Winona.  Passing mentions of Rand, Chapel, Uhura, and Riley.

Word count:  34,000+ (I just can’t write short fics!)

Chapter 3

Comments

[bookaddict43]

Poor Jim I say again! *huggles him*

I love that the Sheriff bought Jim straight to the local doctor. That is so small town! The kids ares so cute and I like Pavel asking all the questions. Leonard is annoying me right now *frowns at him*, but I love how he thinks on his feet and convinces both Jim and the Sheriff about the relationship.

[rogueangel1998]

Making Bones' actions convincing somehow was the hardest part. A movie can get away with a lot of 'suspension of disbelief' but it's so much harder in a fic because you are sometimes in the mind of the character and I really didn't want this to go too out of character. In my mind it was a very fine line and I hope I did it well. My daughter and Caitri were instrumental and helping me with this.

Thanks!

RA

[treksnoopy]

This continues to be wonderful.
Love that Leonard's conscience is already tugging at him.

[jachelle0627]

This chapter is a hoot and a half. I was laughing and giggling all the way through (Jim Kevorkian-*sporfle*). I don't watch very many movies, but I actually caught "Overboard" on cable once when I was bored and I thought it was cute. I love your take on things. The children and poor confused Jim are delightful.

[rogueangel1998]

Thank you!

[emluv]

Oh god, this is so funny. I do feel a bit bad for Jim, though. He seems so lost and pathetic, and Leo's descriptions of his past must have him horrified. The boys are adorable--love Pavel in particular. Love how you're fitting everyone into the film's structure.