A Little Off the Top (4/?)

[roguelotus]

Chapter 4 of A Little Off the Top.

Comments

[cschoolgirl]

I like that Logan's first instinct is to safe Rogue, even if it she doesn't need it.

This is also the part that I want to know Logan's thougts, but I'm sure that they run parallel to Rogue's. They can both be so blind sometimes. :)

*sigh* This piece is so perfect. Love your writing.

[roguelotus]

I thought that was sweet, too. And someone on WRFA commented that they wanted to know Logan's thoughts in this scene, too. Kinda got me thinking that maybe I needed to do a remix of the story, but from Logan's POV...but I've got other plot bunnies hopping around, so I'm not sure if I'll get to that! Maybe just a quick one-off of this chapter only... :)

[cschoolgirl]

I've tried to turn around and do the other POV for a story before and it can be hard with a long story. Making things match up etc. If you did decide to do Logan's POV you could do just this chapter and throw in something like the talk at the stream didn't go as planned or he thinks she wants to be friends.

Other plot bunnies!?!

[roguelotus]

I think that is a good idea. And yup, I've got other bunnies, and they are multiplying! I have to resist the urge to start another story before I finish this one!