LJ Idol 11, Topic 5: “My enemies are all too familiar...”

[roina_arwen]

Nevaeh looked at her reflection.  Her slender, pale finger lightly traced the surface of the glass, from the top of her tousled blonde curls down the bridge of her aquiline nose - which to her eternal annoyance was not quite evenly centered between her sapphire blue eyes. Her finger continued down to the cupid’s bow of her lips, then paused and

Comments

[nikkiii_brown]

Wow!!!

[roina_arwen]

Thank you! I love a good WOW! ❤️

[adoptedwriter]

I love the “darkness “ in this. Great scene setting.

[roina_arwen]

I’ve been trying to do better with creating atmosphere. I’m usually not “dark” but this topic seemed to inspire it. Thanks for reading!

[ellison]

I like that it unexpectedly turned spooky!

[roina_arwen]

‘Tis the season! Thanks for reading!

[elderwoodpixie]

Cool story! I love that it's so unexpected.

[roina_arwen]

Thanks so much! ❤️

[static_abyss]

I love this story. I like the descriptions and especially how you build Nevaeh as you go along. But my absolute most favorite thing is that Nevaeh is Heaven backwards.

[roina_arwen]

I knew someone would pick up on the names! It’s one of the reasons the mirror was so important - thanks for reading!