LJ Idol, Topic 21: “The Way Back”

May 05, 2020 01:26

Author’s Note: This is a continuation of last week’s entry ( Read more... )

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roina_arwen May 5 2020, 05:50:28 UTC

adoptedwriter May 5 2020, 17:19:19 UTC
Interesting stuff. I hope Lana wakes up.

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roina_arwen May 5 2020, 21:22:30 UTC
Me too! Thanks for reading!

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lyssa027 May 5 2020, 23:27:01 UTC
I'm glad you continued this story. I hope we get to see more of it :)

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roina_arwen May 6 2020, 00:19:27 UTC
Thank you! We shall see how the topics fall.

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bleodswean May 6 2020, 22:18:40 UTC
I adore serials!!! I love how dreamlike this is - great work on that, it can be tricky and I think you've been successful here.

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roina_arwen May 6 2020, 22:46:13 UTC
Thank you, I’m glad that quality came through for you. The topic seemed perfect for a continuation. Thanks for reading!

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tonithegreat May 6 2020, 22:38:53 UTC
This is great. I think it works as a stand alone, too. And I like the way you balance your research with not getting into too many details of it in the story, but keeping the story realistic.

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roina_arwen May 6 2020, 22:49:58 UTC
Since it’s hard to tell who reads week to week since not everyone comments, I always try to make entries self-contained if possible. Thanks for reading (and commenting)!

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