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rokeby

Kill the Chorus

Feb 24, 2013 14:14

Title: Kill the Chorus.
Rating: NC-17.
Pairings: Kyuhyun/Sungmin.
Warnings: PWP, underage boys having sex(over the age of consent).
Word count: 6517 words.
Disclaimer: Super Junior own themselves, I merely came up with the idea.
Beta: Rina~.
A/N: This was originally a part of my nano, but seeing as I never will finish it, I decided to post this ( Read more... )

genre: au, rated: nc-17, group: super junior, genre: high school au, genre: boarding school au, pairing: kyuhyun/sungmin

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choleef8 February 24 2013, 16:00:56 UTC

oh my!!~~~~~ hoooooooooooooooooot!!!!~~~~

rokeby February 24 2013, 22:15:30 UTC

hihihi ^w^ so glad you think so! Thank you so much for reading and commenting :D

sweetsmirk137 February 24 2013, 16:17:12 UTC

i believe i am beyond awed..

thank you.

that's it.

i'm ...../brb dying

rokeby February 24 2013, 22:16:43 UTC

huhuhu! I'm glad you're in awe! That's a positive thing right. I'm so glad you liked it, but please don't die! ;w; thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D

mad_nux February 24 2013, 16:37:32 UTC

fuck yes hawt kyumin smut ngggghhhhhhhhhh

rokeby February 24 2013, 22:17:46 UTC

hihi~ glad you liked it! :3 thank you so much for reading and commenting :D

leeminhyun137 February 24 2013, 17:42:54 UTC

jadhjfhlskahlfkhalfhal HOT!!!
my KyuMin!!!!

rokeby February 24 2013, 22:18:37 UTC

/gives you water to cool you down. I'm glad you liked it! ^w^ why yes kyumin is perfect! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D

keobukbi February 25 2013, 05:34:46 UTC

Boring.

rokeby February 25 2013, 07:15:22 UTC

Aw, I'm so sad you feel that, but I understand where you're coming from. There isn't a lot happening in this, which is why I tagged it as PWP ^^'''' hopefully I'll write something you'd like someday. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D

keobukbi February 25 2013, 20:03:54 UTC

Sorry if I hurt your feelings but smut is always the same thing, just a different place. I wonder if the people that seem to enjoy it have ever had any persomal sex experience?

I must confess that I only read part of your fiction. When I realized the story line was the same old thing I stopped.

I am sure you will write a wonderful fiction someday that doesn't require pages of smut.

Please keep up the good work. Thank you.

rokeby February 25 2013, 20:32:53 UTC

Ah, no you're just giving me your honest opinion and I respect that. People like different thing I guess? That's the great thing about us human beings. We're all different :D And I wrote this because I wanted to, which is what we should do. Write for ourselves. But yeah, thank you for your opinions ^w^

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