Until that night - II - Thorki fanfic

[rollina]

A/N: Please read Until that night I first, if you haven't yet

Comments

[avari_maethor]

That was... super yummy. I enjoyed it a lot... and that pic, no wonder you were inspired!

Only suggestion that I have is to put spaces between the paragraphs. It kinda runs together and gets hard to read.

[rollina]

Thank you so much! :)))

And thanks for the suggestion. But I generally don't like to put spaces between the paragraphs, if there's not a "big" change in the story, I'm used to "see" what I write as book pages, talking of layout; moreover, in this one I tried to render the "rushing" of feelings, words and actions, and even if I understand it may get hard to read, it was a conscious choice. :p

[avari_maethor]

It wouldn't be bad if there were indents for the new paragraphs. I tried to do that originally with my own writing but the coding became increasingly hard and time consuming so I just went with putting the spaces between the paragraphs.

[rollina]

On that I agree, I always use indents in Word. But you're right, the code is too annoying when it comes to this sort of things!

[hvergelmir]

Thank you for sharing this! My suggestion is the same as the previous comment :) Aside from that, I'm totally looking forward for more from you! :D

[rollina]

Ohhh thank you so much then! :)))
About the paragraphs, I will see, I really don't like blank spaces on a page if there's no big change in the plot... But well, I'll see! ^^