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[rollingplains]

Title: -none-
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ariadne/Arthur
Word Count: 975
Summary: Focus is paramount.
Author's note: This was meant to be darker, but it didn't work out.

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Comments

[angleico3156789]

I am loving this. Frustration for Arthur and mischievousness on Ariadne's part. Can I just say that I love your dialogues? Not am I only loving the entire fic, I love the last line the best.

You need to continue this hon.

[rollingplains]

waah! thanks so much :)

[metonymy]

I love both their voices in this, and how you managed to balance between "snarky" and "pissed off" and "flirting" without crossing into bad movie romance territory. I think I need to reread this about ten more times. And that last sentence is killer.

[rollingplains]

you're too nice! i'm glad you enjoyed

[undrheavenskies]

Wonderful banter! So playful, yet edgy. Well done!!

[rollingplains]

i love writing dialogue so i'm glad you liked it...thanks!

[_likimeya]

Awwwwwwww! I didn't know that two people shooting each other could be so adorable. :D It's good that it's not darker, because this way it's great fun.

[rollingplains]

i wasn't sure two people shooting each other COULDN'T be dark...haha.
thanks!

[dayofcaligula]

I love your dialogues. Arthur's the only one who's trying to make it dark here, but Ariadne's just beaming with light.

[rollingplains]

thanks! he's apt to do that, isn't he?