FNL Fic: Six Kinds of Coke and a Cup of Coffee (Tim, Landry)

[romancandles]

Someone left a comment on a ficlet I wrote that said that it made her stomach hurt. To that, I can only hope this makes all your stomachs hurt. In addition, apparently I am unable to write fic that does not involve dessert in some way.

Friday Night Lights
Six Kinds of Coke and a Cup of Coffee
Tim, Landry. Landry bets Riggins practices that smile

Comments

[romancandles]

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

[rachel_wilder]

I liked this...great interaction between Landry and Tim, but this was my absolutely favorite:

Besides smiling, Tim has two other expressions: blank and confused.

Great job!

[romancandles]

Ha! Thanks so much. I love them together and I was trying to get give a Tim-through-Landry's eyes here. Glad you liked it.

[coralfly]

Guuh...this is so delicious. I have kink for fic with food, so I love the inclusion of the banana cream pie. :)

The interaction between Landry and Riggins is cautiously comfortable, capturing the hesitant, odd yet fitting beginnings of their relationship.

He doesn’t particularly want to talk about Saracen. “He’s on a date with Smash Williams,” he sighs long-sufferingly. “Guess he thinks Williams won’t put out if I’m around.”

“You let him cheat on you like that?”

BWAH! And yet, I can totally see Landry sulking over the fact that he now has to share Matt with Smash.

Denise makes a little claw with her hand and growls, “Go Panthers!” as she retreats like a demented sex kitten in search of her beloved camera.

Denise was perfection and her inevitable reaction to Riggins so true!

[romancandles]

Apparently food is my weakness. Maybe because all I remember doing in high school is going places to eat. I love the dynamic between these two so much (or, what little we've seen of it) so I tried to capture some of their back and forth. Of course, now that Matt's run off to Smash, Landry has to find someone new to fill that spot and Riggins is just sitting around, waiting. Look out, Matt! Thanks so much for reading and telling me what parts stood out for you!

[1407graymalkin]

with that slow half-smile like he can’t believe someone would pay attention to little ol’ Timmy Riggins.

That's it! I didn't get it until now, but that's it!

I love Landry/Tim at the diner.

And Denise needs to be pitched to the writers.

[romancandles]

I love how Tim's charm seems all accidental, but is completely and totally crafted and I feel like that's a thing that another guy would see and a) roll his eyes and b) be envious of. Oh Tim. Landry's on to you! Thanks for taking the time to comment!

[oxoniensis]

I just love the two of them together so much, and you write them so well! I loved this!

[romancandles]

They're my favorites because I'm a sucker for odd couple dynamics. I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks so much.