Comments | romancandles: FNL Fic: These Fears They Fall Away (Tim/Jason. Adult)

romancandles

FNL Fic: These Fears They Fall Away (Tim/Jason. Adult)

Jan 23, 2007 10:27

One way to pass the sadness of not having Heroes to watch on this night (you guys, are they available on iTunes? Could someone check for me (my internet is too shabby to)? I might write you something nice if you like my writing as a reward!) is to post fic.
ETA: Downloaded from iTunes! Thank you paradise_city!

Friday Night LightsThese Fears They Fall Away ( Read more... )

fnl fic

Comments 20

1407graymalkin January 24 2007, 20:41:57 UTC

*flails*

*dies*

*dead corpse flails*

*from beyond the grave* TIMMMY! BABY! HE LOVES YOU! DON'T WORRY!

1407graymalkin January 24 2007, 20:43:32 UTC

He makes a promise and a toast and they all shine in the perfect light of Jay’s smile.

The next day, the world turns over and none of it matters anyway.

By the way. I'm off to have sex with this line. You can have it back when I'm done showing it the time of it's life

romancandles January 26 2007, 18:14:39 UTC

Thanks so much! Poor Timmy. He thinks he's so unloved. If only he could meet his fangirls. Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting!

jillapet January 24 2007, 20:58:31 UTC

Wow-so heartbreaking, so real, so angsty.

Timmy + Jason Forever. And no one can convince me otherwise-even Timmy and Jason.

romancandles January 26 2007, 18:16:36 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm not normally a super angsty writer, so I'm happy that you thought that part worked well.

devilc January 29 2007, 23:54:26 UTC

He sits forward, pours his remaining drink onto the dry grass. “Okay,” he says, twirling the bottle in his fingers, “here’s how I figure it’s gonna work.”

He makes a promise and a toast and they all shine in the perfect light of Jay’s smile.

The next day, the world turns over and none of it matters anyway.

Okay, I was reading this story and liking it ... you've really captured what's itching away in Tim's soul, IMHO.

But the way you looped in that actual line of dialogue from the pilot and then that last line?

Killer.

romancandles February 6 2007, 14:18:56 UTC

Thank you so much! I had that last line stuck in my head forever, so I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks very much for taking the time to comment!

shelbecat February 5 2007, 19:22:56 UTC

OMG - that was amazing. The imagery you conjure - it's stirring. Not to mention Tim & Jason and how you capture them perfectly. I didn't even think it was canon until the very end, such a tale you spun.

I'm nearly speechless!

The beer is faded gold and flat. Even after a few, his mouth still twists at the first sip of every new bottle.

Such a small detail but perfect. And true.

“Huh. Well, uh-” Jason breaks off with a little laughter, trails his hand down Tim’s back. Tim doesn’t want to be the one to lean forward first, but he does because Jason never will. It’s half-kiss really because Jason’s grinning all the while, mouth almost out of reach. “Hey.” It’s a whisper against Tim’s mouth. “You know-”

I was trying to pick a line that captured Tim so well, but it's hard! Such a great story. Really.

romancandles February 6 2007, 16:09:45 UTC

Thank you so very much! I'm so happy that you like my imagery and writing style--that's always the highest compliment. Thanks for taking the time to pick out the details you liked. This was a difficult story for me to write in terms of Jason and Tim's characterization so it's great that you think that I got them right. Thank you commenting!

waltzmatildah April 17 2009, 12:21:43 UTC

I've never actually seen an episode of FNL (it's never aired way down here at the bottom of the world where I live!) and I don't even really know much about it, but I do know that I love angsty hot boys, and this is great.

Really well written, the subtle tension between Tim and Jason at the end... the obvious tension between Tim and Smash... If I did watch this show, I think I would love Tim!