Pacific fic

[romancandles]

The Pacific
Renegade Dreams
Leckie/Hoosier
“Problems, private?” asks Leckie with a grin. “Anything I can do to help?” Gratuitous porn. For the Porn Battle prompt: The Pacific, Leckie/Hoosier, smoking.

I can't believe I'm saying this but please do not link this fic to anyone's facebook or tumblr that you know was involved in the making of The

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[shecrows]

if there is one thing to be said for the pacific weather, it's that it guarantees our boys will always be at least half nude. i approve of these auspicious beginnings.

Leckie half-thinks that while every other man packed the regulation shaving cream, socks, and razors, Hoosier stuffed his pack full of cigarettes.
accurate.

Hoosier’s hair is still damp from the river, curling at the ends into a fine golden halo at the nape of his neck.
this resonates. probably because i have a thing for napes of necks (and any and all mentions thereof) as well as casual metaphorical deification. especially when it's ironic.

“You wanna find me some of that wine? I know that dirty bastard Red is hoarding some. I bet you could sweet talk him out of it.” Hoosier almost mumbles the words, focused on his painstaking mending, stitch by slow stitch, and Leckie’s at loss until Hoosier’s mouth twitches at the corner.oh. oh oh oh. hoosier playing with leckie, 3oifuoifjad. no words for how much i love this. grinning like a damn fool rn. and leckie's immediate "

part two because lj is making me split my comment rrr.

[shecrows]

Each time Hoosier pulls off a bit, Leckie jerks against him and Hoosier’s fingers feather at his hips like a warning.
i lied, i have to quote that because alkjfoiu3foij3foijadlfkj.

no, oh my god, just. this entire blowjob is just. jesus christ. leckie forgetting himself, and hoosier's sharp pinch bringing him back, and then leckie continuing, and hoosier just humming and taking it, eyes sharp, and alkjf9u3f9u3f morgan i am going to die. and then hoosier coming while sucking leckie off hnghaslkg MORE BUTTONS PUSHED thank you.

Hoosier looks sleepy and glazed; it takes a half a second for Leckie to realize that he’s already shot his load into his olive briefs. Leckie doesn’t wonder when he had the time, just tries to angle Hoosier’s face against his. Hoosier turns his mouth away at the last minute and Leckie pulls back, confused, until Hoosier gives him a sheepish look and rolls his jaw from side to side awkwardly

Re: part two because lj is making me split my comment rrr.

[romancandles]

camille are you serious? you can't go around setting high comment standards like this for pwp okay because when i FINALLY FINISH MY EPIC i'm going to be like "write me a book, bitch."

ugh i think that you were the one that put the idea in my head about hoosier being a whore for dicksucking okay. even as i was writing it i was like "this is all camille's fault, this gratuitous porn scene" but then i figured it didn't matter that i basically just shamelessly stole from you if the result was more porn.

i am going to write lecking giving a blowjob okay. and he's gonna suck and hoosier's gonna be like "my god man get off your knees and just fuck me already."

Re: part two because lj is making me split my comment rrr.

[shecrows]

ugh i probably will write you a book, a goddamn ulysses-length novel, and you will goddamn read it all.

NO, IT'S CANON, OKAY. like, you can just tell that he loves having other things in his mouth besides those fucking cigarettes. oral fixation much? and just, no, i look at him and i'm like, "oh, you dog, you like sucking dick, and you're good at it." so w/e. FURTHER THE CANON. FURTHER IT.

"my god man get off your knees and just fuck me already."

okay, you are seriously making it difficult for me not to just track you down, strap you to the computer, and keep you there until you finish said fic. oh my goddd. ugh, you are making me want to write more, but in my head i'm like CAMILLE YOU HAVE THINGS TO DO FOR SCHOOL STILL YOU KNOW THIS and i'm like SHUT UP PORN IS MORE IMPORTANT.

[ad_exia]

jdfduaifuadiofa

Yeah. That's all I can say about this.

Because it was effing amazing OMG.

[romancandles]

Thanks! I am constantly driving people to incoherence.

[ad_exia]

The mark of any great writer!

Really, it was fabulous, and I loved it. :D

[mllesatine]

Fantastic work. What really pushed my buttons (as shecrows so deftly put it) was Hoosier's reluctance to kiss Leckie. I won't go as far as saying that he was ashamed at that moment, maybe a bit self-concious about getting off on giving blowjobs. :) And then the trade off at the end.

It was hot as hell here for the past two weeks and the description of the Pacific weather made me pity the boys. Bloody mosquitoes, bloody sweating. :(

[romancandles]

Thank you! I'm happy it worked for you!

My AC is shitttttty and it's humid here so I just thought "what do I hate about my life right now that I can put in this fic?"

[mllesatine]

I don't have AC. But the weather here is not too humid. But I had 90F in my flat yesterday.

[romancandles]

I didn't have AC last summer and basically spent the whole summer in my underwear.

[spirograph]

“I might’ve if you weren’t such a two-stroke virgin.”

I LOLED IRL

Great stuff! :))

[romancandles]

Thanks!

[moetushie]

UH, AMAZING. I LOVE IT.

[romancandles]

GOOD BC THIS IS FOR YOU FARZEEN AND YOUR BEAUITFUL PROMPT. I was all "omg she's gonna read this and be like why is that degenerate on my flist."

[moetushie]

Darling, if there were more degenerates on my flist like you, I would probably become a shut-in, because there would be absolutely no reason to leave home.

I love you. ♥.