Drabble: Jayne/River, Smoother

[romanceguru]

Title: Smoother
Author: Romanceguru
Disclaimer: Joss is the boss of me.
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Rayne
Word count: 300
Prompt: “Hit” for

Comments

[gilove2dance]

YAY! A new story! And so cute! Oh Jayne, falling in love with River....so happy!

Beautiful imagery and choice of diction...truly gorgeous writing!

[romanceguru]

Love smushy albeit not entirely smooth Jayne. Him falling in love never gets old, does it? I guess that’s what drives the Rayne fic. That or hot sex.

Thanks for the writing compliments. Feared I was a bit rusty. : )

[cmk418]

This was wonderful. I loved Jayne pretending to sleep.

Glad you got your Rayne-y touch back!

[romanceguru]

Me too! This actually came to me this morning like a wet dream. I don’t know which was more exciting, the fantasy or realizing that it occurred!

*pets little kid Jayne*

Thanks!

[bookaddict43]

Yay! Good to see you back and posting at the comm! Particularly since I forgot to change the prompt this week *facepalm*

You're beginning River/Jayne is so cute. I like the word picture of Jayne feigning sleep and his fingers tangling in her hair.

[romanceguru]

I’d tell you that I noticed the miss, but…you know.

I seriously thought my writing days were over, but maybe sometimes you just need a nice long break from it all. Hopefully the inspiration keeps.

I’m glad you liked those bits. Jayne is essentially a dork when he’s smitten. Nothing warms me more. : )

[idyllictorture]

That was really good. I enjoyed it.

[romanceguru]

Thanks. I’m here for your pleasure. Or well, at least Jayne is. ; )

[sunshineali]

Nice to see this from you. I miss your fics and always hope you'll write more. I love your Rayne! :)Ali

[romanceguru]

Thanks so much. But actually missed? Wow. *blushes*