TPTB-CH.16 Revelations Marcus/River

[romanceguru]

Title: Revelations (16/?)
Series: The Powers That Be
Author: Romanceguru
Disclaimer: Joss is the boss of me.
Rating: R for heaps of immorality
Fandom: Firefly/Angel crossover
Characters/Pairing: Marcus Hamilton/River Tam
Warning: Possibly very dark and disturbing
Timeline: Set a day or so after “ Triggered.”
Summary: Hate consumes her. Truth and revelation

Comments

[kittykat1979]

Wow, that's a bout all I'm capable of saying right now....that was freakin' fantastic!

[romanceguru]

Yippie! No chapter has felt more right in its conception. So I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it! : D

[guinny_hamilton]

Dude. I mean, dude. Dude!

This is... just... wow. I love that she's defeated him but not physically or mentally, just by making him fall in love with her. You sidestepped the whole Marcus is so much stronger conundrum beautifully!

I'm sad that there are only a few chapters left, though :-(

[romanceguru]

All good things have to come to an end, right? Unfortunately. I know. I lurrrrrrve these two together! Who would of thought it when I first started? I certainly didn’t. It was purely experimental.

Spot on, my dear! The only thing more powerful than hate. ♥

[karanina]

HA! I KNEW he was trying to convince himself as much as her that he didn't care about her in the last chapter!!!

So relieved that Simon isn't really dead, tho.

I wonder what she's gonna do now? Will she escape, find Simon, and join the crew of a Firefly that has a Marcus lookalike? Cos that would be cool!

[romanceguru]

You read it!!!

This story needs lovin'. And apparently so does Marcus.

Marcus was purposely being cruel to River to get her to stop loving him, because that's what the prophecy ordered. Her loving the face of evil has upset the yin-yang balance and unleashed hell on earth(s).

There will be some Firefly. *g*

[charlie_jae]

Ok I took a hell of a chance reading this, and I so do not regret it. Its hot, different and completely took me by freakin surprise.

Please tell me that there is more where this came from. I was biting the tips of my fingers reading this last part.

[romanceguru]

Yes, different pairing indeed. That's what makes it so much fun to write. I don't have to be redundant!

Thank you for taking a chance. This story needs readers and I'm not done just yet. Slowly but surely working on the next chap. RL is just keeping me busier than I'd like! It obviously doesn't understand that I have fiction that needs to be written!

[charlie_jae]

It obviously doesn't understand that I have fiction that needs to be written!

LoL

It seems to be an occuring theme amongst the writers as of late. We should all give a sacrifice to the muse and maybe it can kick RL's ass.

[bookaddict43]

I'm catching up and I love it so much! I'm so glad Simon is alive and that last line is just so awesome - beautiful work! *sighs*

[romanceguru]

You got to it! I'm so glad. And you lurve it!!!

How do you make Marcus love un-sappy? I’m trying. ; )