Drabble: Mal/River-I Can't Sleep

[romanceguru]

Title: I Can’t Sleep
Author: Romanceguru
Disclaimer: Joss is the boss of me.
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Pre-Mal/River
Prompt: "Interest" for firefly100 
Word Count: 100
A/N: Unbetaed. Post-Serenity. Yeah, my goal was Wash/River but the darn thing didn’t want to cooperate. Too moody. Anyways, partly inspired by Azure Ray’s, “Sleep.”

There seemed to be a

Comments

[bookaddict43]

I like the sense of quiet and peacefulness that runs through your story. And I love the words you use.

Also thanks for participating this prompt!!!!!! :D

[romanceguru]

I'm having writing issues. I do so love a drabble to ease me back into it. : )

Thank you, Fran. To quote Achilles, "She gave me peace in a life time of War."

[crystalkei]

Beautiful!

Not my pairing, but just goes to show, the right words make a person forget. :)

[romanceguru]

Dude, coming from you, that means a lot. *beams*

But then again, who wouldn’t be occasionally mesmerized by River?

[willow_reece]

Very good, love the quiet moment.

[romanceguru]

Thank you! I'm sure under other circumstances, they'd be rather noisy. ;-p

[gwenfrewi72]

Mal is a bad, bad man but shhh, it's River's little secret. LOL

Absolutely wonderful. Had that peaceful sense to it with every word.

[romanceguru]

Mal = bad. See? You get it!

Thanks so very much!

[shareece]

Wow that was really good. The silence between them says so much. You can just tell that they're both speaking to eachother without saying a word and that one sentence River says just confirms it. I do hope you expand more on this little drabble if not it was still great.

[romanceguru]

Wow, thanks! I love the unspoken bond or chemistry between two people. I’m glad you want this snippet to live on. : )