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irespressogirl in romancingwizard

One Drop Too Few

Dec 21, 2008 17:21

Challenge Twenty-One: Winter Holidays Past
Title: One Drop Too Few
Author: irespressogirl
Wizard/Witch: Sirius Black/Marlene McKinnon
Rating/Warnings: PG-13/R
Genre: Romance/Humour
Word count: Exactly 500
Prompt: 24. molten gold Felix Felicis
Summary: Sirius needs a bit of luck, but he doesn't get the kind he expects.

( One Drop Too Few )

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irespressogirl December 22 2008, 14:09:59 UTC

Thank you! Ah, well. Just think how bad it would have been had he taken enough to get laid and then it wore off...somehow I think Marlene would have liked that even less. I had fun writing Sirius and James -- I think they're great characters.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

gelsey December 22 2008, 13:04:09 UTC

*shakes head* Boys will be boys. Good on Marlene for putting a stop to it! I love your characterizations here.

irespressogirl December 22 2008, 14:10:42 UTC

Thank you! *laughs* Of course they will. It helps when you have great characters to work with. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

harmony_bites December 23 2008, 00:30:21 UTC

Ha! Interesting to see James and Sirius here. You wrote them so they really come across as friends of that age and like their canon selves.

irishcyn December 24 2008, 02:34:42 UTC

Hehehehe!!!! Poor Sirius! *sighs* I love him to death. I loved the interaction between James and Sirius! I can totally see Sirius's face when he sees Marlene. And her response to the conversation!!! *dances* Toast!