Fic: Each Grain from Hardship (by lilac_way)

Mar 15, 2008 02:27

Title: Each Grain from Hardship
Author: lilac_way
Recipient's name: perspi
Pairing/Genre: Ronon/Jennifer
Prompts used: memory like water, comfort food
Rating: R
Word count: 3025
Notes: beta by the lovely and talented smittywing Set after Quarantine but before to Kindred.

Summary: Ronon remembers love and home.

Tell me what you eat, I'll tell you who you are. -- Anthelme Brillat Savarin )

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perspi March 15 2008, 14:52:30 UTC
Oh, how wonderful! I love Ronon's memories, his thoughts on comfort food, how Jennifer is different from Melena. And Teyla! And this line:

Ronon sometimes though it was more lonely to be Sheppard than it was to be one of the last remaining Satedans.

Thank you for this!

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lilac_way March 16 2008, 00:07:42 UTC
Thank you! I have to say, I was INTIMIDATED when I got your name -- your stuff is so good! I'm glad I did right by your prompts.

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perspi March 16 2008, 00:47:25 UTC
*blushes*

Oh, you flatter me. And this is absolutely wonderful--take your bows, my dear--you deserve them!

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jebbypal March 15 2008, 15:06:33 UTC
Great look at Ronon's past and him taking care of Teyla.

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lilac_way March 16 2008, 00:07:59 UTC
Thank you!

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zillah975 March 15 2008, 17:10:12 UTC
This is beautiful! I love the quietness of it, and Ronon's memories of his mother and his home. He and Jennifer are lovely together, and I love the affirmation of his friendship with Teyla, and the ending. Just gorgeous.

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lilac_way March 16 2008, 00:12:04 UTC
Thank you so much! This really came from that moment in Mortal Coil where Ronon took Teyla's hand and took her to the infirmary. He's always portrayed as a warrior -- but sometimes he's so, so sweet! He just seems like someone who had a happy childhood. Thanks for commenting!

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erda_3 March 15 2008, 23:22:00 UTC
This is such a sweet comforting story.And Ronon making sure Teyla gets the corylus nut is such a lovely touch.

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lilac_way March 16 2008, 00:13:33 UTC
Thank you! This came out differently than I originally intended, but I am happy with it. (LOVE your icon, BTW!)

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erda_3 March 16 2008, 00:42:09 UTC
Thanks. Icon is by ls_silence. She has done some lovely ones.

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lilac_way March 21 2008, 22:55:11 UTC
Thank you so much! And I have to admit, I made rice pudding after writing this!

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