FIC: Lean On Me (When You're Not Strong) for kimberlite

Mar 15, 2008 02:45

Title: Lean On Me (When You're Not Strong)
Recipient's name: kimberlite
author: telesilla
Pairing/Genre: Ronon/John, episode tag
The prompt or prompts used: sex, please. ;) Sheppard/Ronon (as a pair or within OT4): connections/loyalty.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: none. Well spoilers for "Outcast," but we've all seen that ep, right?
Notes: I went ahead and went with the ( Read more... )

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atlantisgrrrl March 15 2008, 12:04:45 UTC
Holy fucking moly. *drops dead from teh hot*

Also: "I suck at the whole comfort thing," he said.

"Yeah well, he sucks at taking any comfort, so you're even."

And yet ... :) Beautiful!

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kimberlite March 15 2008, 14:58:44 UTC
Eeee! So very hot!

John wouldn't ask for help, but he still needed someone watching his back.

Love the OT4 and all of them looking out for John.

Fucking John was like no sex Ronon had ever had before he came to Atlantis; it was all rough edges and hard rhythms and everything they did in the gym carried to extremes. With Teyla there was a precision and care that John called "tantric," and Rodney was all about clever, inventive sex, but John and Ronon just fucked like this: down and dirty and all too often on the floor.

Guh! This captures their relationships perfectly.

"I've got you," he added. "Tomorrow too. You know that, right?"

And the care underneath the rough is what really makes them work.

Thank you so much for this, I love it! :)

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justbreathe80 March 15 2008, 15:29:13 UTC
Um, yes. That. I love that this is the way that Ronon knows how to comfort, and I think this is exactly how it woudl go.

Thanks.

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grey853 March 15 2008, 21:04:24 UTC
Now, that's one way to get a person's mind off bad stuff! Well done. Loved the dialogue in the first scene and the heat in the second.

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zillah975 March 16 2008, 05:05:08 UTC
I love this! The sex, of course, which is scorching, but the real care and love between them, and amongst them all.

Also, With anyone else, he'd have added "you're right," but he tried not to say that to Rodney too often. *snarf* Awesome!

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