Fic: wait for me, wait for me (by justbreathe80)

[justbreathe80]

wait for me, wait for me (5592 words)
Recipient's name: tielan
Pairing: Ronon/Keller
Prompt used: Keller - Earth, a look into Satedan culture.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Big spoilers through "Quarantine", and a tiny, blink-and-you'll-miss-it spoiler for "Trio".
Notes: tielan - I hope you like this! I had a massive moment of panic at the end of writing this

Comments

[tielan]

Oohhh!

I love the descriptions and the energy of Jennifer's friends, Ronon's thoughts on her and Atlantis, and the way they're reaching out to what they can be together over the course of the story.

Thank you! It's an awesome gift to have received!

[justbreathe80]

I'm so glad you liked it! I was really nervous, because I knew that you wrote John/Teyla, and other pairings, but I had NO idea about this, and frantically scanned your LJ after I had written this to make sure that you weren't going to be disappointed.

Thanks!

[grammarwoman]

This is really a beautiful story here. I enjoyed the careful circling they did, neither wanting to make a wrong move. Their joining at the end was pretty damned hot, too. *grin*

I hope TPTB write them together as a couple in Season 5. They had such good chemistry in Quarantine...

[altyronsmaker]

i'm such a ronon/keller shipper and this just..guh..fed my wish. yay.

LOVE his point of view about earth and how he gets to experience something different from the black limo, suited agent, hunting down kidnappers times that he's had before. I"m glad he likes earth, too.

And the sexin. Definitely hot. Loved this!

[briar_pipe]

Oh, perfect! I love the uncertainty here, the way they're dancing around each other out of fear. And I love Wisconsin through Ronon's eyes, the landscape and the people and how he's not prepared for either.

Everyone else on the Atlantis expedition was so guarded, especially with touch, that he'd just assumed it was a cultural thing.

Oh, great detail. Ronon's just so observant, and this works perfectly.

She's small but somewhat terrifying

Awesome OC. (Thought Ronon should be used to terrifying things in small packages, by now. *g*)

[margarks]

This was so lovely. You really gave such great glimpses into Ronon and his previous life just by showing us his POV of his life now. And his feelings for Jennifer and her feelings for him are somehow both gentle and intense at the same time, and I can really feel how much they need each other.