Mai... if there is one thing that I truly praise to you about your fiction... it's that you make me feel. You make me feel so raw, so cold, and so hurt by the time I'm done reading I just want to walk away and mourn about it as though it were my own life that was ending; written out to it's fullest life span and utterly finished.
I loved this a lot more than I'm willing to admit, because I usually hate Itachi-included fics... I dunno, I guess I always feel a lot of people don't get his characterization as wondefully as you've managed to capture him in the this. And what's even better is that you built it up into something more... really nice job... I think I'm gonna go cry now though ne? That or write something painful to avoid the sticky mess of tears... ;D
It's just as fucking awesome as the first time I read it. Lulz, this is the fic that spawned our late night FFPM convos and made us the messily entangled souls we are now! Hey, sentimental value. Ka-stanng~
Seriously, I love every version of Naruto you write. ♥
I thoroughly enjoyed this fic,though it hurt my heart alot especially in the sixth chapter. This has got to be one of the best written Naruto fanfics I have ever read and it is a gem, especially with a rare couple like this.
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I loved this a lot more than I'm willing to admit, because I usually hate Itachi-included fics... I dunno, I guess I always feel a lot of people don't get his characterization as wondefully as you've managed to capture him in the this. And what's even better is that you built it up into something more... really nice job... I think I'm gonna go cry now though ne? That or write something painful to avoid the sticky mess of tears... ;D
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Seriously, I love every version of Naruto you write. ♥
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Great Work!
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Well written and moving as hell~ Loved it, and how you made me love itanaru.
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There are no words to describe this fic, other than the fact that you've just made my day, no week--LIFE....
....AFTERLIFE!
<3
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