[Fic] Motions in Stilted Time

[ronsard]

Title: Motions in Stilted Time
Pairing: Sasuke/Sakura, Ino/Sakura, Neji/Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Love is not a fairy tale for the faint of heart.
Disclaimer: Naruto is the property of Kishimoto Masashi.

Comments

[empath_eia]

*dies* I love you so much. SO MUCH.

This is possibly the most realistic look at what would actually happen if Sasuke and Sakura actually got together... suddenly I don't think I can see them working out anymore. It would take a really really good fic to change my mind now. Damn you for corrupting my sweet vision of SasuSaku luurrve!! But seriously, this is fucking fabulous. Yay for NejiNaru and InuSaku! I can't wipe the grin off my face that plastered itself there when I first saw that! And bubble fights... it's like my ultimate fantasy.

Like I said, I love you.

And that link was a riot. Wonder where mine falls? Probably under angsty romance... 'this is so wrong, but so right. Blah. Blah, blablablah. Blah.'

[ronsard]

Honey, your stories are too diverse for this lil' old link. But if I had to pick one, I'd say angst romance too ;)

I'm reading your prof's book.... O.O .... Yeah, basically.

Don't get into the SasuSaku love! It is a shallow product of fangirlism. NaruSasuSaku, now that has potentials.

I personally don't care much for NejiNaru, but with Sasuke unavailable...

[empath_eia]

Hahaha, I find the thought of NejiNaru preposterous but for some reason I love seeing it... can't pinpoint why. Neji is really frickin' hard to write in character, I've noticed, mostly because everyone wants to pair him up and he just isn't the type of guy who would ever really share his life with someone. Or so I see him, anyways.

SasuNaruSaku... YES. They should not either be all together or totally split up. There should never be an odd man out with them. Hence, NaruSaku is also out for me. They're like TohruKyoYuki from Fruits Basket... you just can't divide that.

Teehee! Fangirl talk!

[ronsard]

Neji is... scary. It's hard to write someone with so little passion into a relationship. NejiNaru's ok, since naruto pretty works with anyone for me. He's the little chameleon of my fandon ;P

The only reason I think I can stomach NaruSaku is because I think if any couple has to happen in the canon, it'll be this one. It's like R/Hr in Harry Potter. I wouldn't read/write it, but I approve.

The TohruKyoYuki love is great and magical. Too bad the mangaka seems bent on splitting Yuki out ;_;

[fringe_x1]

wow wow wow. i loved every bit of this. where to begin? i think my favorite would be the unrequited naru/saku, the naru/sasu implications, neji, the ICness of it all, and just...how real it was. and of course ino. what an incredible ino.

gah, i could gush for hours and hours ^^ seriously, you captured sakura's, and just everyone'spersonalities so perfectly. if sasuke/sakura were ever to happen, i'd see it going somewhere on these lines.

[teruame]

I don't even know what I can say about this...pure awesomeness, you are. You made the situation so realistic and maintained that beautiful edge at the same time.

I think I'm going to fangirl you now. -runs in circles ecstatically-

[anonymous]

I just have to say I am in total love with everything you write. I was reading the entries off naruto_choice and your name kept appearing again and again. Teh Shishu piece, the crooked house, seven days (I'm still reeling from that one), Deep River... I am in complete an d utter awe.

This was so sad and so realistic and so wonderful. It's really strange because some of the scenarios you used I've used in a story I've done on ff.net(called 'Aftermath') but I veered too much towards fluff despite trying to give it a realistic vibe. I wish I could be more like you.

Thank you for all these wonderful pieces.

Bob5 (my ff.net name as I don't have an lj account)

[animeshon]

Wow - Not much more can I say. This was awesome. I really loved the way everyone was portrayed and how Sakura & Sasuke's relationship was really kinda doomed from the start and deteriorated slowly. Also loved the hints of NaruSaku and SasuNaru. And poor Ino. God this was brillant.