HBP Story - Untitled (R/S)

Jul 18, 2005 23:38


Title: Untitled - HBP story (R/S)
Author: ronspatronus

Rating: PG-13 (for mentions of slashy sex and cussing)
Warnings: Lurker with a first time post! HBP SPOILERS!! Rampetant Tonks-hate (not really but you know...)
Disclaimers: Everything owned by the most evil one: She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named
Summary: Molly and Arthur and Minevra all had said their two Knuts worth ( Read more... )

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lovinlupin46 July 19 2005, 03:48:10 UTC
Lovely! It'll make the book easier to read. :)

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<3 ronspatronus July 19 2005, 04:35:47 UTC
Thanks much!

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intotheaether July 19 2005, 03:52:00 UTC
Spelling nitpick first.

“What we do together is our purgative,”

Do you mean prerogative?

He had not, unfortunely, counted on Molly Weasley.

*unfortunately

I didn't think the ending was weak! It was very abrupt, but it worked well with the story. Also, it fits in perfectly with the book. We know what really happened behind the scenes before the funeral. :)

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! ronspatronus July 19 2005, 04:37:44 UTC
Thanks! I thought I had gotten all the spelling! I think it's simply that I can't pronounce prerogative! So I couldn't figure out how to spell it! :P

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reddwarfer July 19 2005, 03:52:05 UTC
Prerogative not purgative. Otherwise, very nice.

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ronspatronus July 19 2005, 04:38:06 UTC
Thanks!

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jcho July 19 2005, 04:35:17 UTC
Love the way you made it fit in with the book.

The idea of Remus frolicking around with a rainbow coloured flag is highly amusing. I really liked that paragraph though, paragraph 3, that is.
And I must say I agree with Sirius; I for one would not complain if they were to go about snogging in public.

I don't think the ending was weak either, it was conclusive and fitting.

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*blush* ronspatronus July 19 2005, 04:38:40 UTC
hehe thank you mucho!

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tinocka July 19 2005, 05:06:27 UTC
LOVE YOU! "HOLDING HANDS DOESN´T MEAN ANYTHING!" REMUS IS JUST TOO GAY! LOVE!

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<3 ronspatronus July 19 2005, 05:12:26 UTC
I love you! And I also love your icon! hehe

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