Erm, did you edit using the version I beta-ed? I had fixed some of the problems with wording/tense and comma splices I noticed, but didn't mark those in red. ^^; It's fine if you didn't want the changes, just making sure you knew I had made some suggestions. :D
Oh those ugly costumes are good for something! I saw that this entry on my f-lists a few hours ago and told myself I could read it only after I finished studying...I have never used my time studying more effectively XD And it was a great reward because I adored this <33333
There needs to be more angry Aiba because angry aiba is HOT XD
Erm, Aiba aren’t I supposed to try and get free now? Why are you sitting on me?’
Aiba leaned in close to Sho’s ear, so that Sho could feel Aiba’s hot breath on his neck. ‘Maybe I’ve had a change of mind.’ He whispered. This is when I screamed
Aiba what are you doing?’ ‘You don’t like it?’ Aiba purred in his ear. This is where I died because I could hear Aiba saying this! Also it reminded me of when he actually purred during an episode of shimura zoo and the noises he made during the last himitsu.
Sho waited as he heard Aiba undress behind him. Sho turned his head to see Aiba produce a tube of lubricant. ‘How come you have that?’ Sho asked. And then it clicked. ‘You’d
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Sakuraiba smut!! Loved it and especially since you wrote it. I need to restart posting of my fics. All I have posted is my Sakumiya and Matsumiya fic. I really need to finish typing my Aimiya fic then post it. Heehee.
I didn't think I'd like a dominant Aiba, but whoa--that was super hot. Now I want Sho to do something similar to Aiba, mwahaha. Thanks for posting this!
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Also the link you set up at jent_fanfics isn't working. If you're having trouble just post the link as is: http://roobes83.livejournal.com/136229.html
Not as attractive, but still effective.
Or copy and paste this:
<.a href="http://roobes83.livejournal.com/136229.html">seme!Aiba fic in the html posting tab and NOT rich text without the . in the front of the a.
Erm, did you edit using the version I beta-ed? I had fixed some of the problems with wording/tense and comma splices I noticed, but didn't mark those in red. ^^; It's fine if you didn't want the changes, just making sure you knew I had made some suggestions. :D
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I so fail at posting >.>...
I used the beta-ed version! but maybe i can repost fixing some of the other problems...
Thanks for the suggestions! :D <3
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Oh those ugly costumes are good for something! I saw that this entry on my f-lists a few hours ago and told myself I could read it only after I finished studying...I have never used my time studying more effectively XD And it was a great reward because I adored this <33333
There needs to be more angry Aiba because angry aiba is HOT XD
Erm, Aiba aren’t I supposed to try and get free now? Why are you sitting on me?’
Aiba leaned in close to Sho’s ear, so that Sho could feel Aiba’s hot breath on his neck. ‘Maybe I’ve had a change of mind.’ He whispered. This is when I screamed
Aiba what are you doing?’
‘You don’t like it?’ Aiba purred in his ear.
This is where I died because I could hear Aiba saying this! Also it reminded me of when he actually purred during an episode of shimura zoo and the noises he made during the last himitsu.
Sho waited as he heard Aiba undress behind him. Sho turned his head to see Aiba produce a tube of lubricant. ‘How come you have that?’ Sho asked. And then it clicked. ‘You’d ( ... )
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yeah i thought it was more interesting writing aiba as angry and seductive XD
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