[Uraboku] Inertia

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Inertia
Author: masanami
Character(s): Hotsuma/Shusei
Word Count: 2,301
Rating: R
Warnings: Non-explicit sex.
Summary: They may be broken but as long as they keep going they can keep the pieces together.
Author's Note: A birthday present for ravanna ♥ Happy birthday, bb! She wanted something heartbreaking and with arguing. I hope you like it, hun~

Comments

[tsubakig]

Beautiful fic, i just love how the scenes shift, the image just come into my mind so naturally (:
Thanks for sharing!

[masanami]

Thank you hun! I was a bit worried if the scene shifting was a bit much...or if it would work with the past and present being muddled together so I'm glad you liked that about it^^

[mitsu_san]

Oh the drama, my heart aches and bleeds and hurts. T___T *CRIES*
You make me like a masochist, bb D: XD!

As always I love how your words flow so well, I read and read and then realized that I reached the end D:, GAH! And HOW can you make your smut so beautiful, HOT ( my face went like .////. asdf) and heart-breaking? WOW, I felt so many emotion during this scene :)

It was a bittersweet sad scene when Hotsuma found himself back into Shu's arms and held him tightly. GAHH MY HEAAAAAAAAAART *sobs hard*

I'm sure ravanna will love it to death <333~

[masanami]

gah what a lovely comment, bb!! ♥

asjdhkhkashd my smut writing, beautiful? LOL I kinda felt like I copped-out on a lot of it hurr-hurr. I think that scene was a my favorite though, with Shusei trying to cover his scars and Hotsuma just having to leave...waaah those boys!

I hope she does^^ haha especially since I wrote it in one night so it was done fast.

[mitsu_san]

How do I explain - it's beautiful to me because their actions are clear but you didn't go into details ^_^. As Haru-chan said, very subtle, and cloudy and somehow hazy to me. And as much as I love graphic smut, I think it fits this pairing pretty well; the subtle words turn into sweet words right from a poem. Your writing is neither complicated nor simple to me, it's just RIGHT.

And those minor things like your formatting, I really do like it ♥
*dies* I'm SO sorry for the mass of editing, dear HAHA *embarrassed*

[masanami]

ohmygosh what do I say to that? You've given me such lovely comments that I really feel speechless...because the way you've described what you've read is very much the way I felt when I was writing and reading it myself and it's such a fantastic feeling as author to know that the people who are reading what I write are seeing it the way I'm wanting it portrayed. That really, really means a lot to me. gah. just thank you sweets, THANK YOU! ♥

LOL no worries <333

[haru_kurofai]

Masanami-chan ♥
With you writing such beautiful fics in Shusei's perspective and Ravanna-chan writing in Hotsuma's, your fellow fangirls are gonna die from moe overload sooner or later XD I'm sure Ravanna-chan would love this fic too!

Ooooooh the heartache!! Our boys being back in the dark days filled with guilt and self-loathing... ;3; *sobs* I loooooove the flow of your words, and the scenes just come so naturally into my mind ♥

Loved the smut too ♥ bittersweet and subtle, I could feel the emotions the boys were going through. They were so in-character ♥ and the way they argued, it's so them!

No matter what happens, they will always come home feeling safe. Home being their other half's arms ♥ Loved it bb ♥ *hugs*

[masanami]

Awww ♥

Flow is so, so important to me when I write...and it's just amazing to hear that you like it. I'm glad the smut was okay too. I don't really feel like I can write smut very well, so the fact that it worked in the way I wrote it makes me feel quite a bit relieved. I always get so nervous about that stuff orz

waaaah thank you for the lovely words Haru-chan! I feel so inspired ♥

[haru_kurofai]

The smut was okay?! That's an understatement honey! It was delicious ♥ *glomps* I loved how subtle it is, it's SO THEM ♥

Ehehe ♥ Keep the Hotsu x Shusei love coming hun ♥

[masanami]

Hurr-hurr. Well in that case I'm really glad you enjoyed it! So not confident in my smut writing abilities muaha so I'm happy it came out well^^

[ravanna]

Oh dear, oh dear, I'm a little bit speechless right now. Maybe even more than that; I just stumbled home from having a little blast with my girls and see and read this and it's

[masanami]

oh gosh, your comment and your words are just making me blush and grin so hard right now. I'm sooo glad you liked your b'day gift <333 I was a bit worried because I rushed it to get it finished before the end of the day in your time zone and it had smut scenes in it too which I am sooo not confident in writing LOL so hearing that you enjoyed it just makes me so damn happy!! gah your words, I don't even know how to take these compliments about my style of writing and characterization other than to thank you for such lovely words--and that it's such a freaking honor to hear that my writing was able to spark such emotion in you while you were reading. There's really nothing more I could ask for as a writer. Nothing.

Pfft. Do not feel small as a writer. You are an amazing writer and I love your works and wannnnt more of them. I am literally on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter of your fic here^^

right now I'm feeling like the most precious thing in the world

Youuuu are precious to me <3333

[ravanna]

!! <3<3<3 I really, really liked it, and jeez, just seeing that you rushed for me is SO sweet, especially with the fact that I cannot see your so-called rushing at all; not anywhere in your style or the way the plot envolves. It really kept me feeling, and it also made me realize again why I love them so much together <3<3

Hahah, well, thank you ♥ Hope you'll have fun with that one too as soon as I put it on.

And you are precious to me, too, darling. You so aaaaare~

[masanami]

Haha well I'm glad it didn't seem rushed LOL I had originally planned on a little drabble but those boys wouldn't let me stop writing^^ waaaah I wish I didn't have to work so much because I am on such a creative binge right now and all I want to do is curl up in front of the computer and writewritewrite until I can't think straight anymore.

[masanami]

Thank you for reading, hun, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!