[Uraboku] Bruises and Bitemarks (1/?)

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Bruises and Bitemarks
Author: masanami
Character(s): Hotsuma/Shusei, mentions of Senshirou/Kuroto, Takashiro, Tachibana, and others
Word Count: 6,920
Rating: R
Warnings: Host AU. Suggestive material. Possibly NC-17.
Summary: Shusei's the perfect host and Hotsuma's the perfect person to ruin everything for him.
Author's Note: This is going to be

Comments

[ravanna]

Oh my - just starting to read this already showed me so, so clearly again what I love about your writing, and why your style is just made for something long like this

[masanami]

*feels a bit speechless here*

OMG first of all, I am just ecstatically happy that you enjoyed this, especially considering that a large portion of it was written from Hotsuma's POV and you already know I swoon over your Hotsuma ♥ He is so tricky and hard to write for but it was really really important to me to paint the image of Shusei and his profession from Hotsuma's eyes. And of course, writing an AU is tricky because I want them to be IC and I don't want to change the fundamental dynamic of their characters so the fact that you thought they were in character is making me grin so big right now

[ravanna]

I loved it. I re-read it when I went to bed yesterday, and I still love it, even cooled down and with a little more "objective" views on the whole matter. It's just - you picked such an interesting theme, you write it so delicate, it's meant to be loved, and gaaaaah, I am so waiting for the next part ♥ ...you already got any idea when you want to post it? *cough* (I'm not sure, have you already finished writing this story?)

♥ The DYNAMIC between them - Shusei, oh Shusei; I think I fell in love with him as a host, the way he moves, the way he TALKS, it's really a pleasure, knowing you here in this fandom and writing exactly what you're writing.

[masanami]

gah I can't believe you felt this was re-read worthy but I am SO happy that you enjoyed it and found it interesting enough for a re-read ♥ I don't know, but whenever I actually went to Kabuchiko I just got so inspired with the idea. I have SO much that I am going to write about with this storyline and theme and I hope you enjoy it as much as you liked the first chapter~ I haven't finished the story completely, mostly just bits of it and then a large part of the second chapter is written. Fortunately, the first chapter always seems to take me the longest so I don't expect a huge wait for the second chapter :)

Shusei has always, always been seen as the perfect possible host in my opinion. The way he acts in canon just SCREAMS that he would be perfect for that role. gah, he was instantly and without a doubt the person I wanted to use to convey this story with. asdjhkj ♥ thank you bb, I know the fandom appreciates YOU as well because your own writing blows me away every chapter^^

[masanami]

Thank you dear~ I'm glad it could brighten up your day a bit^^ I couldn't have an AU fic without my Sen-kun and Kuro-kun ♥ They will definitely get appearances in this story :)

[masanami]

yaay~ I will definitely be including many characters from the canon storyline^^ of course, Sen-kun and Kuroto-kun are my second favorite pairing so they will play an important part ♥

[tsubakig]

OH MY , this is TOTALLY AWESOME!

The whole plot's just too exciting to read.*heart doki doki*
I guess the trip to Tokyo is really worth it :D
Ah~ someone should just draw them dressed in host suits ><

Once Hotsuma was seated, the curtain was drawn closed
gosh, i was soooooo nervous here. I keep thinking of what hotsuma will do/say if shusei came in.><

“Sorry to keep you waiting.”
I totally jumped at this, it's like "Ahh! He came in!! what to say? "
*panic*

I just love how Hotsuma was swayed by Shusei, like aw~ Love at first sight, kinda feeling.
The kissing part is just too Hot ! I dont know how to decribe the awesomeness of the plot, it just runs in my mind so naturally.

Thanks soooooo much for this, dear! -HUGS-
My heart's gonna drop out. haha.

[masanami]

I'm SO happy that you're enjoying this, bb ♥

Haha yes, my trip to Tokyo was OBVIOUSLY a huge inspiration for this. And visiting Kabuchiko itself^^ It's so cute to see your reactions to the scenes and how they moved you~ thank you for sharing those with me and reading this first chapter ♥

[tsubakig]

There's more to go? *look above*

Oh that's afaghds great!! i'm so slow ><
hoho, i cant wait ^^

Ok, i'm gonna out my heart back, and let it drop again when i read the next chapter ♥

[masanami]

Yes dear this is my first multi-chapter Uraboku fic^^

haha I didn't really reformat it like a multi-chapter fic, did I? lol It's been a lonnng since I've last done one of these :)

I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as much as this one ♥

[mitsu_san]

OH GOD, I'M AFRAID I LOVE YOU SO MUCH HARDER THAN BEFORE, BB!!
~~janffnfamda!!!

First of all, you're aweeesome.
I always knew that you're a GOD but you left me speechless from the first line to the last line, it was THAT EPIC. I needed to remind myself to take breath constantly~~ashadhdb~~! This is ONE of the fics I'm gonna wait for days and weeks and am SO SO goddamn foward to reading the next continuation, BB ♥♥♥. I'm already craving for MOAR; wah it HURTS to wait because you make me need it like AIR DDDDD: XDDHAHAHA!

I'm lost in your words; actually had to realize that I wasn't in the club but in my tiny room reading this HAHA. All the while you make me bound to this fanfic; fascinated of the life of a host and the way you portrayed it.

The introduction was brilliant. All the girls; the way our Shusei jumped from one table to the next table; how Shusei knew how to flatter a girl; how he simply makes a girl HIS without feeling anything. I can SO picture this. Immediately, I saw flashes of colors and the scene was suddenly SO

[mitsu_san]

ASDFASDFDSASDF and OMG, he moaned, he MOANED! WHAT A DELICIOUS IMAGINATION *_*
*is dead* FUCK, it makes me insanely happy to see that Hotsuma COULD make Shusei feel SOMETHING ;_; ISOLOVETHISREACTION~~WAH

...Girl, seriously, I always loved your fanfics, but this is thousands of times BETTER.

HOW DO YOU DO THIS? WHY SO AWESOME? Can't you BE LESS awesome, WOMAN?

Because I was stopping at almost every 3. line and thought that you are SIMPLY my HotsuShu GOD HAHAH! I was as curious as Hotsuma and amazed by it's unfamiliar place. But you know, it's YOU who gave me such nice imagination. You exactly showed again WHY you are such a good talented author and I can feel every bit of your EPICNESS in this fanfic. Speaking of it, I wasn't thinking of it as a fanfic but as a novel because it was THAT high-quality and beautiful to me

[masanami]

asjdhakhd~ I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT BB ♥ because I, like, kept saying I would post it and then it kept getting delayed and delayed but now the first chapter is finally finished!*feels so speechless* I don't even know how to respond to your comment because all I am doing here is sitting here and grinning like an idiot and feeling all sorts of happy that my good friend enjoyed the first chapter so much and gah

[haru_kurofai]

Oh my god, Masanami-chan I forgot how to breathe!!! ♥ You're SO awesome for writing this, and it's definitely worth the wait *glomps* I absolutely loved every single word of it! You, my darling, have created the perfect atmosphere, I had the same feeling as Mitsu-tan, I felt like I was in the club instead of my tiny room (I wish LOL

[mitsu_san]

*randomly jumps in*
You had the same feeeling like me, yaaaaay <333 *glomps*
I'm sad that I wasn't in the bar for real ;_; HAHAH LOL xD

[haru_kurofai]

XDDDDDDDDDDD yaaaaaaaay *glomps back*
Gaaaaaah, Mitsu-tan, we would just be constantly staring at Shusei ♥

[masanami]

Haru-channnn! ♥ asdjhk the fact that the atmosphere and the writing and the characters were able to come together for you makes me SO FRIGGIN HAPPY <333 gah, the fact that you EVEN read it when you're not keen on AU fics makes me feel so special, especially so because you thought they were IC^^ That's really important to me because I want their fundamental dynamics and relationship to remain in tact from the Hotsu and Shu that we all know and love ♥

Kuroto is such love and would totally be the one to pick a fight with Hotsuma right away LOL and Tachibana of course would singlehandedly get Hotsuma to buy the most expensive drink, without a doubt^^ Sen-kun will definitely be appearing and I hope his role will be nice twist too ♥ I could not write this AU fic without Kuroto and Senshirou because they are so much LOVE <333

gaaaah I am so happy you enjoyed it bb!! *clings* ♥