[Hetalia] Revolutionary Lines :: Chapter 10

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Revolutionary Lines
Author: masanami  
Character(s): England/America, Prussia, France, Spain, Canada, Romano
Word Count: 5,506
Rating: R
Genre: Drama
Timeline: American Revolution
Warnings: Graphic, angst, dark, explicit
Summary: England becomes aware of changes in young America, making him begin to see the growing colony in a different light and

Comments

[blader_tsuki]

I can't believe you left us off like that! I want an update soon, lol. I need to know what happens next! DX

Another great chapter! Except, I really do not want to be left off like that, lol.

[masanami]

Update will be coming soon! Promise! Expect an update in the next two weeks :)

Thanks for the comment, though <3

[blader_tsuki]

Wow, really? That made me feel better, lol. <333

[masanami]

I try not to be too cruel :) I wouldn't want to leave everyone in suspense for too long.

[sephydark]

Wow, you can really feel how serious America is. He really is willing to change a lot about him to win this. Although it seems like it's not quite enough...

England shot America!? I--I never expected that to happen. I suspect it wasn't supposed to be fatal, though (or if it was, England will seriously regret it); we all know England can't shoot America.

[masanami]

I've made a nice little mess, haven't I? haha...Thanks for the comment!

[amouisrafel]

I can't believe you just ended it there. xD My fangirl self screams "NO!" while my rational self is all "PERFECT CLIFFHANGER!"

I'm loving Prussia more and more in this (and pretty much everyone else...). And the interaction between America and England at the end. BEAUTIFUL. >.< This chapter has got to be my fave so far because there is so much awesome in it. I can't even begin to describe it. <3

[masanami]

wahhh sorry for the cliff hanger but I couldn't resist! At least the next chapter will be out much sooner rather than later (like, next week, hopefully...?)

Thank you very much for the lovely comment. I'm glad the characters come out well with the writing <3

[madnesshp]

Why are you so fabulous?

Soooo fabulous. ♥ ♥

I feel it important to say that I adore the hard work and the tenacity that America is putting forth here. His struggle is evident in this chapter, and I think this part is often overlooked by most other works of Hetalia fiction that portrays the Revolutionary War. America is indeed strong, but he still needs to be properly trained. Absolutely, yes.

Uwaaaa cliffhanger why Dx

[masanami]

Thanks lovely, you're so sweet!

I always get the impression that America couldn't do everything on his own, but he was willing to bite his tongue and ask for help to get what he wanted. <3