[Hetalia] Revolutionary Lines :: Chapter 12

Feb 21, 2010 01:23

Title: Revolutionary Lines
Author: masanami
Character(s): England/America, Prussia, France, Spain, Canada, Romano
Word Count: 3,878
Rating: R
Genre: Drama
Timeline: American Revolution
Warnings: Graphic, angst, dark, explicit
Summary: England becomes aware of changes in young America, making him begin to see the growing colony in a different light and ( Read more... )

fic series: revolutionary lines, pairing: england/america, type: multi-chapter, series: hetalia

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masanami February 22 2010, 08:42:31 UTC
asjdahsjhdah t-thank you so much!!

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nonnally February 21 2010, 16:19:41 UTC
Thank you so much for finishing this fic. You did a fantastic job and at times it literally took my breath away.

I wish I could say more, gush over your writing appropriately, but I'm exhausted.

Thank you for sharing with us. Thank you for laboring with this story as you did. It was intensely satisfying to read.

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masanami February 22 2010, 08:44:15 UTC
awww thank you for reading and supporting me through the process. There is nothing sweeter for a writer than to know that there are readers out there that enjoy what they read. It really touches my heart that you've enjoyed this fic <3

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star_jinin February 21 2010, 16:21:41 UTC
Ahhh I can't believe it's over! I'm telling you, this fic has become my colonial headcanon :D

This was a lovely way of ending it. I love it that you didn't forget the bad friends trio either! Looking back from the beginning of the fic, you really tied it nicely together.

I'm sorry I'm not as coherent as I want to be this morning XD

You're getting fanart for this! ...eventually after I finish the other one I owe....

Also, are you ever planning on writing about the Napoleon Wars/War of 1812? Just wondering

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masanami February 22 2010, 08:46:46 UTC
Its hard to imagine its over too! I bet all week I'll be thinking "I need to write for RL, I need to write for RL" but there won't be anything else left to write! eeek!

I'm glad you liked the last chapter and that it finished well. I really wanted to hit all the bases in some form in the end, but still leave it open and abstract in some manners <3

yay~fanart <333

hmmm..I don't know. I haven't decided what I'm going to work on yet. I have a few ideas but I may need to do some research before I know if they'll work out or not :)

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saemi_mitsuwa February 21 2010, 17:07:32 UTC
I just finished reading all 12 chapters and I just *had* to comment and tell you how much I love this story. The writing, the history, Alfred and Arthur... everything was so amazingly well written. I felt sad when Alfred or Arthur felt sad, happy when they felt happy, and now I can't believe its over!

The ending is great and it really alludes to the big things to come in both Alfred's and Arthur's long history together. I hope you continue writing in this fandom as I will definitely make sure to read your next story =)

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masanami February 22 2010, 08:48:36 UTC
oh wow, all 12 chapters? That's a lot! but thank you so much for reading them and telling me such kind and lovely words. I spent a long time on this fic and tried to make it fit well with the history and the relationship I wanted to portray. Thank you so much <3

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awww_applesauce February 21 2010, 23:23:22 UTC
; A; I have no words. This was just beautiful

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masanami February 22 2010, 08:49:05 UTC
Thanks so much, hun <333

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