blushing all the way home [ao no exorcist]

[roppio]

Title: blushing all the way home
Author: riouu
Length: 1914 words.
Fandom: Ao no Exorcist.
Pairing: Amaimon/Moriyama Shiemi.
Warnings: A small kiss.
Summary: In the remains of an old sweet store, Shiemi comes face to face for the first time with he who trails in her shadow.

Comments

[vampirelg]

Omigawd I remember seeing this on Tumblr just ...this week was it?
and spazzing out like heck

THANK YOU
SO MUCH
FOR WRITING A FIC FOR THIS PAIRING ; AA; <333 (even if it wasn't originally intentional lolol)

[riouu]

Holy wow you're fast, hahaha.

(Are you maybe just possibly the person that reblogged with that lovely comment then fff ♥ That made me smile like an idiot for the rest of the day but I'm shy and fail so I never responded orz)

A-And um, you're welcome! ♥ I couldn't really resist writing something for them; they're a little dysfunctional (mostly Amaimon's fault I think) but somehow absolutely adorable. I'm so so happy you liked this though! ;w;

[vampirelg]

YEAH IM FAST
IM JUST COOL LIKE THAT LOLOL -shot-

(WELL, did it say "FINALLY
FINALLLYYYY
I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR A FIC OF THESE TWO FOR SO LONG
; AAAA; -LOVES ON THIS FOREVER-"
if so
yeah it was me lolol ; U ; )

Yes exactly why I love the pairing!

[kyogres]

I'm not a huge fan of Shiemi or Amaimon, but this was adorable. <3 I've always enjoyed reading unique/unpopular pairings, and now I think I kind of ship it. (Look what you've done!)

The present tense was a bit jarring at first, but I didn't notice it after the first few paragraphs.

I do wonder how Shiemi doesn't realize that Mephisto is a demon too. She sees all the signs, but doesn't seem to connect the dots.

I am a bit confused on this last line: Maybe her classmates don’t but she doesn’t mind so much, for Amaimon later tells her he saw.

He saw... what? I'm kind of sleep deprived right now, so it's entirely possible that I'm missing something.

[riouu]

I have a thing for the slightly more obscure pairings, it seems. ;w; My otp for this series is just...there aren't enough fans of it at all, aha~.

IIII am far more used to writing in past tense than I am present, so that's likely my fault there. I didn't really read this over too much so it's probably full of mistakes and horrible typos and god knows what, oh man. Mephisto is just so obviously demon that it's a wonder the whole school doesn't realise he is one really, haha (the suspicion is likely very high)

Ahh. No no, I don't think it's you that's missing something - reading over it again, I think that last sentence is sort of terribly awkward. It's supposed to refer to the fact that he saw her smiling so much. D: Maybe something like "...but she doesn't mind so much, for Amaimon later tells her he saw it" may have been better or...agh. Awkward line.

All this being said, thankyousomuch for commenting ;u; It makes me super happy to know what people think of what I write.

[kyogres]

I've never shipped anything in this series, so I'll read just about anything. (Except for Rin/Yukio, which kind of creeps me out.) But it's always nice to find something that involves the more minor characters. Okay, Shiemi isn't minor, but she gets overlooked in favor of the boys. Is this your OTP, or is it a different pairing? My OTP for the Pokemon fandom is pretty much nonexistent, so I feel for you there

[riouu]

I ship this and that from Ao no Exorcist but I'm pretty open to anything and everyone and I don't hate on any pairings, so I read almost everything I come across, aha (it's amazing how popular Yukio/Rin is). Ahh, my OTP is Fujimoto/Mephisto actually, which I know is an odd pairing but I-I just can't resist. Both characters and their relationship are really fascinating to me and I don't even care if they are/were sexually involved or not, people's takes on companionship is just lovely to see and read about though sadly there isn't much of them yet /ramble

[sakuramiko16]

This was lovely! I liked the way you wrote them both. Thank you so much for writing a fic about this couple.

[riouu]

Oh--!! Thank you so much! I'm very very happy you enjoyed it and took the time to leave a comment! ♥♥

[voltairemondays]

You really do this pairing justice! I really, really enjoyed this fic. ;v; Do you plan on writing more of them in the future?

[riouu]

;w; Thank you so very much! ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it~. I would love to write more of these two in the future for sure! I have an idea here and there so it's just a case of finishing off other things and concentrating on it~. c:

[innerchorus]

This was ADORABLE, I love love love this pairing and was so pleased to see such a sweet fic for it. :D

[riouu]

Aaaah, thank you thank you!! ♥♥ I'm very happy that you took the time to read this and enjoyed it ;u; ! Somehow, they're an absolutely adorable pair.