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FIC: The Opposite of Afterglow

Mar 19, 2011 09:13

Title: The Opposite of Afterglow
Author: Ella Jane (roquentine)
Word Count: ~600
Rating: PG, barely
Pairing: Kind of Sherlock/John, Mycroft/Lestrade. Kind of.
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
A/N: I read a cracky prompt on the kink meme ("Sherlock. John. Mycroft. Lestrade. In one bed.") and this sprung into my brain nearly fully formed. Which is so bizarre, because I ( Read more... )

fic, bbc!sherlock

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roquentine March 19 2011, 18:16:40 UTC

Thank you! That's a lovely compliment. Non-crack under a cracky umbrella, then? :) Thanks for commenting!

luv_gaara_16 March 19 2011, 23:12:14 UTC

i just died laughing at you're pic its awesome

threebooks3 April 19 2011, 07:02:38 UTC

Your icon. I scrolled down and saw it, then nearly flailed out of my bed in terror. :(

spelevinken March 19 2011, 17:11:14 UTC

HAHA, so freaking awesome <33 XD

roquentine March 19 2011, 18:16:55 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

mazarin221b March 19 2011, 17:20:16 UTC

Lestrade: How does this happen by accident?
Mycroft: You'd be surprised.

Wait, does that mean it's not an accident this time?

Fantastically funny, and I agree with sc010f up there, really not that cracky other than the scene - everyone was perfectly in character, really.

roquentine March 19 2011, 18:17:50 UTC

That's really nice of you to say. I'm glad their voices came across clearly in such a short conversation! This was more fun to write than I thought it would be. :) Thanks for commenting!

morningstarzip March 19 2011, 18:08:54 UTC

John: Sherlock, I'm not kidding, get up, or I take Lestrade.

Had to be my favourite part. Well done!

roquentine March 19 2011, 18:18:13 UTC

He totally means it, too. :) Thank you for reading and commenting!

r34dinglight March 19 2011, 18:36:02 UTC

There is so much to love here, beside the obvious four naked men in the bed.John's words of wisdom of how you know when you have exceeded bed capacity- ie the elbow issue vrs the whole um, yes. you two are siblings ... who have been in this situation before. When it was an accident? which it isnt now? But Mycroft has that one covered because after all in ancient Egypt siblings married.that that was a royal house, seems to have escaped him, but I can see where the House of Holmes should count ...maybe??!? and the ongoing John-Lestrade issues, brilliant! shakes head/dies laughing.

roquentine March 19 2011, 23:38:19 UTC

Glad you found so much to enjoy! It made me giggle to write it, for sure. Thanks for commenting!

BTW, Mycroft doesn't really know anything about ancient Egypt, he just thought he would fake it because he just finished the new Cleopatra bio. *looks around shiftily*