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rory_gilmore

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Feb 13, 2003 15:33

Yesterday afternoon. After school. As planned. I went over to Dean's to help him and his partner on their school project. I'd never met her before. She's new. And she's really really pretty. I hated her. I hated her from the moment I saw her. But they were put together. He didn't pick her. I just had to remain calm ( Read more... )

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angeloflove February 18 2003, 21:54:49 UTC

I just have two comments to make about this.
While I think in certain aspects you capture Rory really well, there was just one thing I noticed looking back in your entries.
You always refer to Lorelai, as Lorelai, not as "my mother", "my mom", or anything else like that. I think to be accurate here, that Rory would not be referring to her mother as Lorelai, especially not in a journal.
Other than that...I don't know where you are from, and if you are a season behind in episodes or something, but if you aren't behind, you really should try to keep the entries close to the storyline...I don't mean, only making entries about what's happened on tv, because obviously you are trying to capture her life other than that, but I mean, if you aren't behind a season, there are some pretty big inaccuracies with what you are saying in here, and what is going on in her life.
Anyways, interesting, you've done well other than that. :)

rory_gilmore February 22 2003, 01:31:21 UTC

Yes, I know I refer to Lorelai as Lorelai and not as my mother or mom and that's generally because she's also Rory's best friend, not just her mother. However, I have mentioned her a few times as mom or mother, infact, in this very entry:

I need my mommy.

It all depends on what I'm trying to accomplish with my entry on how I'm addressing her.

And as for this comment:

there are some pretty big inaccuracies with what you are saying in here

Well, yes, there IS. It's because Rory is apart of not one, but TWO, rpgs.

RPG = Role Playing Game.

The important part is GAME in that term. What I post in Rory's journal isn't actually as important as what's going in the community I'm writing it for. The journal itself, is for my own record.

As for the storyline, "Gilmore Girls" is a guideline for stars_hollow but is by no means, our storyline in the game. That's far too boring. There is a lack of players in the game which is why we sortof use it as a guideline at all, just to make it easier on us.

But in tvrpg, that's a whole different story cause it's a ( ... )