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[rosabella]

I appear to be all about the feet today.  Another poem:

I think intensely of your feet
each time I see you
You turned up barefoot
to class that day
and your old toes captivated me

I think I love them still
though I don't know your name any more
or much at all of you

I remember you liked my words
the way I wanted them liked

And your toes
I remember your toes

Comments

[ironicpseudonym]

I like this. I like a lot of these poems, but this to me stands out as the pick of the bunch. To me it feels like it really captures the mood of the description.

It also makes me want to write. So thank you.

[rosabella]

Thank you :) And that's an awesome compliment.