Smile On His Lips and Cuts On His Hips (21/?)

May 26, 2013 21:05

Title: Smile On His Lips and Cuts On His Hips (21/?)
Author: Rose Rose682
Rating: nc-17
Pairing: Jack Barakat/Alex Gaskarth
Summary: I’d lost count of how many had gaped at my arm with shocked expressions and open mouths, curious people unsure of whether or not they wanted to know the answer asking, “Did you cut your arm?”
Disclaimer: I own neither ATL or ( Read more... )

chaptered: smile on his lips and cuts on, rating: nc-17, paining: alex gaskarth/jack barakat

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rose682 June 2 2013, 06:15:34 UTC
i feel like my writing style is really weird, but thank you for enjoying it! and i was really worried that that wouldnt turn out right wow i should probably have more faith in myself. i dont actually have any idea what im doing but i wish i could tell you some big secret to how this happens, meep. i think this whole story really is just developing jacks character... is that unusual? i dont even know. and wow thank you so much again i thought that might be kind of annoying and irrelevant but i just need to say a lot of this stuff c:

rant away! basically all of this is just me ranting at you guys, so. were they sad enough to cause crying omg i cant decide if thats good or bad? and dont thank me no thank you times a million i just cant even <3

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broken_capulet May 27 2013, 19:45:31 UTC
This is actually one of my favorite chapters. I loved everything about it
"Of course, the most important thing I hadn't done yet was listen to music. My favorite bands would release new records one day, and I had to be around to hear them.

And I couldn’t die before I’d lived. "
that really hit home for me. You're amazing, keep your head up love <33

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rose682 June 2 2013, 06:11:12 UTC
i guess my perspective on my own writing is kind of skewed. wow, i think i wrote that to convince myself if anything, but thats great! thank you so much, and ditto! <3

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atlkicksass May 28 2013, 22:54:19 UTC
What are you talking about, this chapter was wonderful! Lots of deep thought going on, I like that!

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rose682 June 2 2013, 06:10:19 UTC
this whole story is mainly deep thoughts, isnt it? and thank you very much! c:

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