english poem

Dec 15, 2005 11:39

this is the poem i wrote last night for english. i would have to say that it's one of the best stories i have ever written (in a poem)...
and yes it's sad

one last time )

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cheezers December 15 2005, 17:00:15 UTC
i WANT it :)

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rose_in_winterx December 16 2005, 01:10:02 UTC
haha well i can give you a copy if you want

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rose_in_winterx December 16 2005, 01:10:39 UTC
OOO and you should see the picture i got on PowerPoint! SO COOL!!! makes it even better lol

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spacemartian December 15 2005, 17:44:09 UTC
tear tear
bravo
sigh
every girl wants a lover,
and a tragic love story....well, that ends up happy

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rose_in_winterx December 16 2005, 01:10:57 UTC
aww thanks. haha yeah i totally agree

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im_____dead December 15 2005, 17:45:51 UTC
aww that's really good. man, mine, emily's, and kyle's stories were like the only ones that were silly. everyone else's was all sad and depressing.

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xxbecauseicanxx December 15 2005, 18:15:48 UTC
but it was kind of funny when you said 'our's is GAY.' just the way you said 'gay'. it was pretty funny.

I thought you guy's 3 was a nice change of pace.

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im_____dead December 15 2005, 18:30:04 UTC
haha yeah. 'cause laura's was all about a girl dying and ours was about emily and kyle being told to "get bent" by a little kid.

yours was pretty awesome. with the talking sandwich and all.

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rose_in_winterx December 16 2005, 01:09:18 UTC
haha i loved your poems. so funny and i think we all needed a good laugh after like laura's and lauren's and all those sad ones. although i gotta say brigitte's was really strange. haha he kills a kid and his nose turns off hahaha. i don't know why but i find that really funny.

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katha615 December 15 2005, 20:07:19 UTC
Thats really good yay!!! :)

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rose_in_winterx December 16 2005, 01:09:45 UTC
thank ya!

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jellybeanbabi08 December 15 2005, 23:40:00 UTC
wow. that is really good. really really good.

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rose_in_winterx December 16 2005, 01:09:36 UTC
thanks hun. i can't wait to hear yours!

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jellybeanbabi08 December 16 2005, 03:52:55 UTC
i can wait. i can wait a long time. mine sucks...

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