Comments | rose_whispers: FIC: Rhythm and Vocals, Fred/Hermione, NC-17

rose_whispers

FIC: Rhythm and Vocals, Fred/Hermione, NC-17

Oct 23, 2006 15:22

Title: Rhythm and Vocals
Pairing: Fred/Hermione
Word Count: 3093
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Hermione is irritated by an Incident and Fred sets out to make the situation better in typical Weasley fashion
A/N: Written for summer_flinging, this is a bit of silly summery smut. 'Cause what says summer more than hammock sex?

( The most unbelievably innocent smile bloomed on Fred's face. )

hp fic, rated nc-17, fred/hermione

Comments 14

bambu345 October 23 2006, 23:15:45 UTC

Having been, until now, the only person I knew who'd written swing ... er ... hammock sex, I thoroughly enjoyed this. Having also been the only person I know who has actually had hammock sex, I can attest first-hand that it is indeed painful to fall mid-coitus!

I enjoyed this, especially the sloth moment. Your Fred is rogueishly charming.

rose_whispers October 26 2006, 13:17:14 UTC

Thank you! *g* It's not something I've ever tried myself, so I'm glad someone who has enjoyed it *giggles*

thimble_kiss October 24 2006, 11:49:50 UTC

Aw, this was so summery and yummy it just made me smile. The notion of Fred laughing in awe at Hermione's abandon is very nice (and sexy!), and it's so typical of Hermione to get upset because she takes herself a little bit too seriously. And of course Fred's hot, loving making-it-up to her was just ... guh. :)

rose_whispers October 26 2006, 13:17:40 UTC

Hee. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed ;D

dreamerdust October 24 2006, 12:12:09 UTC

I loved everything about this. The fact that Hermione and Fred had been together for a while, but had never really been alone, was a lovely touch. And that Hermione could let go of her inhibitions and express herself so fully...just delightful.

Love your slightly disarming and enticing Fred :)

rose_whispers October 26 2006, 13:18:13 UTC

I'm delighted that you enjoyed it :D Thank you!

snarkywench_64 October 24 2006, 19:13:07 UTC

What a wonderfully endearing Fred! He's compassionate and understands Hermione all too well, yet uses his own unique Weasley charms to break through her barriers.

Fav line: With a helpful smile, he reminded her, "You're not speaking to me right now."

"Right. I'm not speaking to you." Her eyes narrowed. "What do you want?"

Delightful!

rose_whispers October 26 2006, 13:19:01 UTC

Thank you! Blame Inell for making me write so much Hermione/Weasley stuff ;)

mollyssister October 24 2006, 19:28:34 UTC

I enjoyed the banter between the two. It felt like they had been together awhile. I especially liked that just because Hermione is in a relationship with Fred she has not lost her brain. Naturally the lemonade was spiked, and she knew better than to drink it. Well done!

rose_whispers October 26 2006, 13:19:25 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the characterizations :D