FIC: Is that a Decoy Detonator in Your Pocket, or are you Happy to See Me? (2/2) George/Snape, NC-17

[rose_whispers]

Title: Is that a Decoy Detonator in Your Pocket, or are You Happy to See Me? (2/2

Comments

[pitchblackrose]

I really enjoyed this :) Thank you! Excellent George-post-Fred.

[rose_whispers]

There's so much to explore with post-Fred!George, isn't there? I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[x_smartie]

Oh, so I totally didn't know what toe xpect from this but wow, seriously, wow.

Snape as a Pirate, oh, the laughter at that mental image ;)

[rose_whispers]

*giggles* I didn't know what to expect when I first started writing this, either ;) I'm delighted that you enjoyed it!

[nikki74]

I could go on and on about this fic, really.Because...Its freaking perfect: the pairing works, you got over The Lily Problem, you made it work with cannon, and the best part, tou managed to make Snape sound like the Snape I imagine, not the love sick puppy JKR painted in DH, and you did that respecting DH.
And, it was hot.I love you very much right now *hugs*

[rose_whispers]

*blushes* Thanks so much for your kind comments. I was mired for quite awhile after DH because of the Snape/Lily and how central she was in his life, even after her death. I'm happy you liked what I did with that, and with this story!

[nikki74]

I did!I was very desappointed with DH in that aspect, and didnt really want to read Snape!fic, because he sounded so very in love with Lily that anyone else sounded impossible.But Im so glad I gave your fic a chance, it made me want to read HP, Snape!fics again, so really, thank you!

[moonystone]

Their interaction is hilarious! Great dialogie. You can truly write Snape's kind of humour. And George even makes ear jokes!
Love the scathing tones, and OMG, their first kiss left me breathless. And the sex scene... no words. Just hot.
What perfect teasing! And the decoy detonator had me laughing out loud.
Love the story, the pairing is very intriguing, and you have it written very well, not to say great.

Some more nitpicking, I hope you don't mind. "I have been help captive here by my status as a murderous Death Eater and by my own wounds." It's "been held captive".

[rose_whispers]

I had fun writing the dialogue *g* I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for your feedback! *g* And for the nitpick-- I'll fix it straight away!

[moonystone]

Glad to be of help :)

[k8matty]

Aiyee! I just read it all from start to finnish and MERLIN I love it!!!

I love twins/snape but I've never wrote any. You do it so damn well.

and I like it when people write things so they COULD HAVE HAPPENED instead of just wrting smut. Not that I'm oposed to smut. But substance is good too and this was excellent.

Good job. I look forward to more of your work ^_^

[rose_whispers]

Oh, thanks so much! It's such a compliment to me that you read this as canonically plausible :D