[Lucid Dreams] changing colors

[roseletters]

Title: changing colors
Story/Character: Lucid Dreams / Weaver, Kelpie
Rating: PG
word count: 786

Note: Written for the fourth October challenge over on brigits_flame - this week the prompt is "hands". This wasn't what I initially meant to write, but it's what hit they keyboard first, so there you go.

Comments

[darthneko]

You do indeed read it right! ^___^ yay, it must've made sense somewhere along the way.

criers = banshees, hungry ones = sirens

I've seen lap looms! They're very small and cute. I might have cooed over and fondled one in a yarn store once. ahem. ^_^

[darthneko]

O.o yeah, that would be a very different and much MUCH larger thing.

[roseletters]

Ah! Thank you!. I kept having keyboard trouble this weekend, I'll have to comb through it again for typos.

[littlebit1988]

Hey,
This is a great entry!
I did see one thing I wanted to ask you about. Who or what are criers?

If you have any questions; just ask!

[darthneko]

Thank you! Criers are Banshees (traditionally seen washing the bloody clothes of the soon-to-be dead, hence the red fabric association).

Editor

[transitiongodin]

This was a really stunning piece.
As an editor for this week, let me offer an apology for the late edit and also let me say that I found nothing amiss.

My one and only note:
Be careful about writing in this tense. I've always found it a bit...grating when writers leave things in present-tense. It sometimes makes the story hard to follow and hard to read.

You've done brilliantly, though, which is another reason for caution.

Thank you for letting me into this little world, I enjoyed it.