Don't Blink - 34/?

[rosewarren]

Title: Don't Blink - 34/?
Characters: Ten, Rose
Summary: AU. What if Rose had stayed through Doomsday and was the one to end up in 1969 with the Doctor? How would they get back to their proper time? Would they want to?
Rating: PG
Beta: nattieb

Author's Note: All I know about police procedurals in 1969 I learned by watching Life on Mars, so any errors

Comments

[aadarshinah]

oh! Just wow. Finally the Doctor and Rose seem to know where they stand with each other, then this? Just, oh.

[rosewarren]

What can I say? I like a good cliffhanger. Maybe a little too much.

[salimali]

Just caught up with this- good on them for finally getting themselves sorted and now this complication!?!? What a mess!!

I have a word of advice...run!

[rosewarren]

It would not be Who without loads of complications. Poor Rose.

[kissitgoodbye23]

oh goodness :/ more complications!

can't wait for more though!

[rosewarren]

Thank you!

[captaintish]

“Rose was asleep. I don’t wake her up every time I decide to run out in the middle of the night.”

*winces* Oooh, Doctor, probably not the best thing to say to the two policemen investigating a murder! lol

I kind of love that they're FINALLY kissing, and yet they still get all excited about going off to investigate some danger. :D

Oooh, cliffhanger. What is going on? Why is she accusing the Doctor??

[rosewarren]

I love that the Doctor just speaks without thinking, and everyone just goes quiet.

[susanb03]

Oh boy!!! Just one minor change needed ....

“I’m Officer Clayton,” the man said. “We’re investigating a homicide in the building.”

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“Is there a safety issue, DI Rogers?” the Doctor asked. “Do you have a suspect?”

----You switched it from Officer Clayton to DI Rogers :)

[rosewarren]

What would I do without you, Susan??? Even after being beta'd and checked again by me, stuff still slips through.