Tanned. Toned. Tall. (original fic)

Dec 22, 2009 13:43

I actually wrote last night, for the first time in several millennia. It's for the fiction component of thesovereignty, and it's basically an original fic of Christmas silliness (with a dash of romance). Enjoy!

Title: Tanned. Toned. Tall.
Rating: PG
Word count: 1200, ish
Additional notes: The instructions were; We want you guys to write a short story <3000 ( Read more... )

christmas, original fic, why do i love romance so much?, fiction

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ophelia_winters December 22 2009, 14:02:28 UTC
Rosie...you write REALLY good OF.
I kept trying to scroll down and look for for more! ugh, I feel robbed now! I've already fallen in love with the characters and everything! You write anymore, I want to read it!

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rosie_not_rose December 22 2009, 19:45:48 UTC
AWWWW THANK YOU, I LOVE NICE COMMENTS. I'm always really nervous posting stuff, thinking people will say it's crap. XD So thank you!

I quite like these characters too, you never know, I might write more in the future.

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ophelia_winters December 22 2009, 22:32:00 UTC
I look forward to it! If there's one thing that I love in writing, it's well-written characters. And you've got people who feel real, and have distinct (but without being stereotyped in any way, Thank GOD!) characteristics. Good job hun.

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rosie_not_rose December 22 2009, 19:47:06 UTC
Thank you! Means a lot. Let's cross our fingers we place in the competition. XD

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teruel_a_witch December 23 2009, 15:15:48 UTC
Yum, I really loved this, the characters' dynamics is very enjoyable and I'm such a sucker for a good oblivious BFFs' romance :D It's a shame it's so short *pouts*

And he was a soppy idiot, particularly when it came to her. He could never quite work out why.

Heh, 'course he couldn't figure out, it's such a rocket science after all *rolls eyes*

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rosie_not_rose December 23 2009, 17:12:09 UTC
Thanks!

TEEHEE, I know, guys are quite often dense when it comes to this sort of thing. XD

Yeah, I could have written quite a bit about these characters, I found them fun to write, but I didn't want to get too into it because of the 3000 word limit. Also I was running out of time!

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teruel_a_witch December 23 2009, 17:55:03 UTC
I didn't want to get too into it because of the 3000 word limit.
heh, you still had as as much word space as you spent ;)

Well, you could always write more when you have time ;D

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rosie_not_rose December 23 2009, 18:05:41 UTC
Lol true, although I think if I had really got into exploring the characters, I would've written tons and it would have been too long. XD

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