I was very excited to see the beginnings of a new series from you :)
Very promising beginnings, I must say.
I loved this: ‘It’s not what they’re best known for, is it? You never know, though, maybe they run an after-school playgroup in their spare time.’ 'T was a good one.
And the bit at the start where Remus asks Harry where his Mum and Dad are and he says, "They're dead" was just so sad.
And I like the whole Remus/Roman/"Rome has fallen" thing. Links up wonderfully.
Lol, never mind, I love that you were excited about being first on one of my stories! I'm so glad you're enjoying it - poor Harry, he's having a troublesome day, isn't he?
Alright, as a member of the elite "I've-gotten-lost-on-the-Tube-Before" group, I would like to thank Remus Lupin for his kindness... since he is one of the few. The very scant few.
And oh! Those damn escalators! They're at like a 20 degree incline! You get a nosebleed just by riding them!
(Really like this already. Love that Remus was part of the Order without having been at Hogwarts...)
Aagh, I know, those escalators terrify me! I'm a country girl at heart, I get all wide-eyed and puzzled in London. I could do with a Remus to help me! I can cope with the Tube, though, as a result of dating a boy many years ago who lived on the far side of London. The relationship is long over, but my Underground prowess is intact :-)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story - I thought Remus would be far too valuable a resource for Dumbledore not to take advantage....
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I was very excited to see the beginnings of a new series from you :)
Very promising beginnings, I must say.
I loved this:
‘It’s not what they’re best known for, is it? You never know, though, maybe they run an after-school playgroup in their spare time.’
'T was a good one.
And the bit at the start where Remus asks Harry where his Mum and Dad are and he says, "They're dead" was just so sad.
And I like the whole Remus/Roman/"Rome has fallen" thing. Links up wonderfully.
Damn. You write AU so well!
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I love it! I can't wait to read more!
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But now that I don't have to rush to first comment, this is so wonderfully written, I loved when Harry accidentally revealed that they're wizards.
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And oh! Those damn escalators! They're at like a 20 degree incline! You get a nosebleed just by riding them!
(Really like this already. Love that Remus was part of the Order without having been at Hogwarts...)
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I'm glad you're enjoying the story - I thought Remus would be far too valuable a resource for Dumbledore not to take advantage....
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