hmm..

[rosiexriveter]

okay, i am basically writing this on here so i don't forget it. it's a very rough draft, so no criticizing

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[pushyouaround]

you let me keep the cat..
but she always liked you better

i like this part the best.

why such a sad song/poem?

[rosiexriveter]

you like it okay, then?
i'm not sure why that came out, i'm really not all that sad right now. more nostalgic-feeling than anything. the first two lines were something i wrote a really long time ago, i just hated the rest of it..so i was waiting to come up with something better to go with it.

[pushyouaround]

i like certain parts of it. its a song right? other parts confuse me. but maybe just b/c i know you.

[rosiexriveter]

i don't really know if it will be a song or a poem. it was just something my brain wanted me to throw out.
i'm glad you like parts of it..i basically posted it to see if you would like it, since you are poetry lady!